Joy Ride for One
Unfamiliar Wedding Traditions41 total reviews
Comment from Heather Knight
How beautiful! It's the first time I hear about this tradition so I have found your poem and notes very interesting.
The picture is also priceless.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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How beautiful! It's the first time I hear about this tradition so I have found your poem and notes very interesting.
The picture is also priceless.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Haha. That's a perfect word to describe that photo: priceless! Thanks for the nice review, Maria.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the wedding day memories with out of the ordinary tradition that are memorable and the photos are proof of the fun tradition.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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A very well-written poem about the wedding day memories with out of the ordinary tradition that are memorable and the photos are proof of the fun tradition.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Thanks, Sandra; I appreciate this feedback!
Comment from Ogden
A belated mazel tov on surviving the chair dancing, and your age-old marriage that sounds like it worked out pretty well.
Good luck for more mazel tov in the Memories contest!
Don
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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A belated mazel tov on surviving the chair dancing, and your age-old marriage that sounds like it worked out pretty well.
Good luck for more mazel tov in the Memories contest!
Don
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Toda raba, Don! And, yes, so far, so good!!
Comment from jenintorre
I love this poem. I really enjoyed reading it.it brought back many memories and is so uplifting. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Cheers. Jen.
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I love this poem. I really enjoyed reading it.it brought back many memories and is so uplifting. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Cheers. Jen.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Oh haha - "uplifting." I see what you did there, Jen! Thanks for the cute review.
Comment from Flyaway1
I loved this. So descriptive- that I could imagine you both up on those chairs. Good picture. Nice rhyming. I love the last verse that years later you can both look back and have this fun, wonderful memory.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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I loved this. So descriptive- that I could imagine you both up on those chairs. Good picture. Nice rhyming. I love the last verse that years later you can both look back and have this fun, wonderful memory.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Thanks for this warm and gracious review, Flyaway1! Very much appreciated.
Comment from WryWriter
Such a fun celebratory tradition! Love the photograph. Good rhyming scheme in this poetic work. I could almost hear the music and laughter of those having a great time at this wedding.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Such a fun celebratory tradition! Love the photograph. Good rhyming scheme in this poetic work. I could almost hear the music and laughter of those having a great time at this wedding.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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This is such a nice review, WryWriter. Thank you; I totally appreciate your words.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Memories about unfamiliar wedding tradition refresh the wedding day ride how the Italian-Catholic boy had a joy ride once, at the wedding reception, both the bride and groom were lifted up on chairs; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Memories about unfamiliar wedding tradition refresh the wedding day ride how the Italian-Catholic boy had a joy ride once, at the wedding reception, both the bride and groom were lifted up on chairs; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Dr Alcreator; I appreciate this validating review!
Comment from Randa Dayle
What a wonderful..wonderful memory! How cleverly put to paper! I love the look of terror in his eyes... Great poem. Good luck in the contest, may you continue to share with us!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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What a wonderful..wonderful memory! How cleverly put to paper! I love the look of terror in his eyes... Great poem. Good luck in the contest, may you continue to share with us!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Thanks.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a great tribute to your wedding day and the fifteen years you have been together, a scary moment in the picture being perched on those chairs in the air! What a great celebration, your words are a wonderful memory, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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This is a great tribute to your wedding day and the fifteen years you have been together, a scary moment in the picture being perched on those chairs in the air! What a great celebration, your words are a wonderful memory, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Yes, my poor boy; he doesn't like heights to begin with OR not being in control of situations, so this was pretty much a Worst Nightmare scenario for him. He was an incredibly good sport! Thanks for this warm and gracious review.
Comment from Willie P. Smith
This is excellent and very funny. When I got married and my wife cut the cake tradition says she is to very delicately place a piece in my mouth. The piece of cake started to fall apart, so she just shoved it in my face.
An accident, or was it? Very good poem.
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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This is excellent and very funny. When I got married and my wife cut the cake tradition says she is to very delicately place a piece in my mouth. The piece of cake started to fall apart, so she just shoved it in my face.
An accident, or was it? Very good poem.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Oh my! I hope it didn't get on the rented tux, Willie!! We used forks to feed each other to avoid exactly that scenario!! Thanks for your fun review.