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Comment from TPAC
If indeed, believing we are half an half of anything, touching read, bringing back memories of an enchanting occurrence between parties, detailing the word "if", thanking you for its recall.
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If indeed, believing we are half an half of anything, touching read, bringing back memories of an enchanting occurrence between parties, detailing the word "if", thanking you for its recall.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
Comment from moongirlwriter
Beautifully written with a wonderful sentiment. You've done a nice job of following all the requirements of the prompt. I also love the artwork you've chosen. The best to you in the contest.
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Beautifully written with a wonderful sentiment. You've done a nice job of following all the requirements of the prompt. I also love the artwork you've chosen. The best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
Comment from trimple
Good evening, Willie
This is a very sweet and lovely little rhyming poem, told with care and simple words. You must be a delight to share a home with.
much love and good luck
trimple
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Good evening, Willie
This is a very sweet and lovely little rhyming poem, told with care and simple words. You must be a delight to share a home with.
much love and good luck
trimple
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
Comment from LisaMay
Your poem, right from its simple title, shows the goals we should strive for. If we want a happy life, doing those activities of sharing, caring, and loving, makes it all the more possible that we will be loved in return, and then we will indeed have it all.
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Your poem, right from its simple title, shows the goals we should strive for. If we want a happy life, doing those activities of sharing, caring, and loving, makes it all the more possible that we will be loved in return, and then we will indeed have it all.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written rhyming poem about what we put into life determines what we will receI've for our efforts. Well thought out goals to strive for on a daily basis.
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A very well-written rhyming poem about what we put into life determines what we will receI've for our efforts. Well thought out goals to strive for on a daily basis.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
Comment from Gypsymooncat
I tell you, I am going to revolt about the amount of six star ratings we're permitted to give! You're the SIXTH i wish to grace with six shiny stars, but can't, more's the pity. I loved the flow of this, the quirky bounce, and also the lovely presentation. Your colour choices were a treat, as was the poem. Good luck!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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I tell you, I am going to revolt about the amount of six star ratings we're permitted to give! You're the SIXTH i wish to grace with six shiny stars, but can't, more's the pity. I loved the flow of this, the quirky bounce, and also the lovely presentation. Your colour choices were a treat, as was the poem. Good luck!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your remarks about the six stars. It's
nice to know you thought that much of the poem. I too run out of the six stars way too often. Again, thanks for your thought.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Sometimes it can be hard to let people in to love you because of the fear of being hurt but once you let someone love you it is the best thing in the world. Great job
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Sometimes it can be hard to let people in to love you because of the fear of being hurt but once you let someone love you it is the best thing in the world. Great job
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
Comment from dragonpoet
Simply rhymed and smoothly metered poem which tells a simple truth. It shows the way we all should live and what we get from living the right way.
Good luck in the contest and Keep writing
Have a great weekend.
dragonpoet
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Simply rhymed and smoothly metered poem which tells a simple truth. It shows the way we all should live and what we get from living the right way.
Good luck in the contest and Keep writing
Have a great weekend.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
Comment from Jesse James Doty
I love the title, "If." The artwork you chose is amazing in its complexity. Your poem shows us the true simplicity of a life worth living. My favorite line is "If we are loving, We are standing tall." This is such a beautiful way of showing the greatest gift of all. Standing tall. Yes, love's treasures are in us standing tall. I love your added note, which says, "Goals to strive for." This shows that we are not perfect, with only a human way to approach the goals, of which you speak. Very nicely done. Thank you for your optimism and want for the common good.
Take care, Jesse
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I love the title, "If." The artwork you chose is amazing in its complexity. Your poem shows us the true simplicity of a life worth living. My favorite line is "If we are loving, We are standing tall." This is such a beautiful way of showing the greatest gift of all. Standing tall. Yes, love's treasures are in us standing tall. I love your added note, which says, "Goals to strive for." This shows that we are not perfect, with only a human way to approach the goals, of which you speak. Very nicely done. Thank you for your optimism and want for the common good.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Willie. How lovely these words are and yes sharing and caring is the first steps to having it all .Nice entry and good luck Cheers Christine
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Hi Willie. How lovely these words are and yes sharing and caring is the first steps to having it all .Nice entry and good luck Cheers Christine
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019