Renewal
the sparrow51 total reviews
Comment from QC Poet
Beautifully written and thoughtful message. My Favorite bible verse is about the birds in the air not sowing and reaping yet God feeds and cares for them. Thanks for Sharing
God's Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Beautifully written and thoughtful message. My Favorite bible verse is about the birds in the air not sowing and reaping yet God feeds and cares for them. Thanks for Sharing
God's Blessings to you.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Victor,
Very nice poem, my friend.
Adorable image of that gorgeous bird! It works well to help convey the meaning of your verse.
Thank you for sharing.
Jan
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Hi Victor,
Very nice poem, my friend.
Adorable image of that gorgeous bird! It works well to help convey the meaning of your verse.
Thank you for sharing.
Jan
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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No, thank you. Smile.
Comment from His Grayness
I found this work to be very well done in all dimensions of excellent artwork/coloration and perfect writing script done perfectly as well. I have no suggestions to improve upon this work and thank this author for a fine read! HIS GRAYNESS VANCE
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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I found this work to be very well done in all dimensions of excellent artwork/coloration and perfect writing script done perfectly as well. I have no suggestions to improve upon this work and thank this author for a fine read! HIS GRAYNESS VANCE
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Vance.
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you earned it indeed! all the best: Vance
Comment from Connie Frazier
I feel a deep longing in this poem. You've conveyed an intense regret and a desire for second chances. It's something I think we can all relate to. I love your use of the sparrow to convey your thoughts. This poem has a deep tug, but is also hopeful.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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I feel a deep longing in this poem. You've conveyed an intense regret and a desire for second chances. It's something I think we can all relate to. I love your use of the sparrow to convey your thoughts. This poem has a deep tug, but is also hopeful.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you. The "deep" tug is a necessary component of what I wanted to convey.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Ah your poem victortouche about the sparrow, of one asking someone to help me to
Make me a sparrow.
Just a little one.
I feel he/she has a wish that one desires to renew their life so they can free like the little sparrow.
Gert
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Ah your poem victortouche about the sparrow, of one asking someone to help me to
Make me a sparrow.
Just a little one.
I feel he/she has a wish that one desires to renew their life so they can free like the little sparrow.
Gert
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Yes, correct. Although like a sparrow is a metaphor, not exact reality.
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Yes, I realized you were using the word as a sparrow .
Gert
Comment from Donka Kristeva
The longing for freedom is our constant quest. This poem simply and lovingly expresses this idea. The s[arrow, a very common bird with no special attraction, speaks of the poet's humility.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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The longing for freedom is our constant quest. This poem simply and lovingly expresses this idea. The s[arrow, a very common bird with no special attraction, speaks of the poet's humility.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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This is true also, I hope.
Comment from Boogienights
I wish we could. This is a lovely poem about hope and the desire for change. We all have this inside of us, we just need the courage to fly. I think I'd like to be a eagle. Thanks for this thought provoking poem.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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I wish we could. This is a lovely poem about hope and the desire for change. We all have this inside of us, we just need the courage to fly. I think I'd like to be a eagle. Thanks for this thought provoking poem.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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You're welcome. Thank you.
Comment from Miss Sherry
I like this poem though have had to do a bit of thinking. Life is a perplexity that sometimes makes no sense at all. But to be a little sparrow who means no harm, just flies and observes life...that would work for me. This is lovely.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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I like this poem though have had to do a bit of thinking. Life is a perplexity that sometimes makes no sense at all. But to be a little sparrow who means no harm, just flies and observes life...that would work for me. This is lovely.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you.
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You are very welcome!!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This concise, thought-provoking poem on the theme of starting again
makes me think of little every day accomplishments--finishing reading a
book and starting another one, finishing my most dreaded chores, getting
a manuscript sent--that leave me feeling exhilarated.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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This concise, thought-provoking poem on the theme of starting again
makes me think of little every day accomplishments--finishing reading a
book and starting another one, finishing my most dreaded chores, getting
a manuscript sent--that leave me feeling exhilarated.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Right. A different angle, but right.
Comment from Janet Foor
I've often thought that it would be great to be a little bird and fly above the nonsense of the world. To glide over meadow and streams and just enjoy nature wherever I wanted to go.
Nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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I've often thought that it would be great to be a little bird and fly above the nonsense of the world. To glide over meadow and streams and just enjoy nature wherever I wanted to go.
Nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Janet.