Keeping It Real
A raccoon laments.42 total reviews
Comment from James W. Reynolds
Well done. This is a fun poem. When all else fails, steal someone's trash - or when faced with a curse or a limitation, make the best of it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Well done. This is a fun poem. When all else fails, steal someone's trash - or when faced with a curse or a limitation, make the best of it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Thanks, James!
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahaha.
One's just as good as the other, right, Anonymous Poet?.
Love...trash...not much difference there, except that trash tastes better.
Cute animal 5-7-5, and it's actually sorta witty, as asked for.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Hahaha.
One's just as good as the other, right, Anonymous Poet?.
Love...trash...not much difference there, except that trash tastes better.
Cute animal 5-7-5, and it's actually sorta witty, as asked for.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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I appreciate the review, Dean!
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My pleasure! :)
Comment from jenintorre
I like this little 5-7-5 poem. It is very cute and witty. It made me smile and I adore the artwork that you've chosen. I wish you good luck in the competition. Jen.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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I like this little 5-7-5 poem. It is very cute and witty. It made me smile and I adore the artwork that you've chosen. I wish you good luck in the competition. Jen.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Jen!
Comment from Louise Michelle
Racoons are such beautiful animals, but also such pesks. Stealing trash isn't so bad when you consider that they can also break into your homes. It took us two years to get rid of one in our attic. Long story - don't ask, LOL. Best Wishes, Lou
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Racoons are such beautiful animals, but also such pesks. Stealing trash isn't so bad when you consider that they can also break into your homes. It took us two years to get rid of one in our attic. Long story - don't ask, LOL. Best Wishes, Lou
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Hi Lou, I haven't had that kind of experience with them and no, I won't ask;^) Thanks for weighing in!
Comment from Gail Denham
Ahhh. What a cute face. But oh beware. They love that trash. Plus some of them get big enough that we daren't leave our small dog out to quarrel with them. They are clever. You've made that clear also. Nice job.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Ahhh. What a cute face. But oh beware. They love that trash. Plus some of them get big enough that we daren't leave our small dog out to quarrel with them. They are clever. You've made that clear also. Nice job.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Thanks, Gail!
Comment from Malerie
How cute, what a perfect picture to give life to your words. The raccoon certainly has the face of a bandit. I love it "love to win your hear...will steal your trash." Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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How cute, what a perfect picture to give life to your words. The raccoon certainly has the face of a bandit. I love it "love to win your hear...will steal your trash." Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Thanks, Malerie, I appreciate the review!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the racoon seeking a relationship but the girls are very weary about the thief's mask and will not become his lovers. He is forced to steal the trash.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the racoon seeking a relationship but the girls are very weary about the thief's mask and will not become his lovers. He is forced to steal the trash.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Many thanks, Sandra!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, this is just perfect for this contest -- not only is it a precious little guy there, but your poem brings a real smile and chuckle from the reader -- great job! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Oh, this is just perfect for this contest -- not only is it a precious little guy there, but your poem brings a real smile and chuckle from the reader -- great job! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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As always, thanks Y.M.! It got a chuckle from the writer, too;^)
Comment from Sandra Leon-Gonzalez
This is absolutely hilarious. I actually laughed out loud. The picture selected is perfect. Great visualization. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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This is absolutely hilarious. I actually laughed out loud. The picture selected is perfect. Great visualization. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Glad you liked it, Sandra, and thanks for the review! I chuckled myself when writing it.
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Glad you liked it, Sandra, and thanks for the review! I chuckled myself when writing it.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent humorous animal 5-7-5 poem for the contest
The raccoon may look cute, but it is a rather dangerous creature
and very destructive, too.
Now some masked beings, like Zorro are quite romantic.
Excellent picture to match
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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This is an excellent humorous animal 5-7-5 poem for the contest
The raccoon may look cute, but it is a rather dangerous creature
and very destructive, too.
Now some masked beings, like Zorro are quite romantic.
Excellent picture to match
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Thank you, RS!
