Comment from
trimple
Good afternoon, Jim
My goodness, this is such a wonderful tribute to our dear departed friend and wonderful author, Michael Cahill.
The site has sadly lost one of its most adored writers, who did so much for so many.
Your poem is written not only with sadness but with a sense of pride in knowing him.
I think these two lines sum him up perfectly :)
he would have loved it.
but gentle be like fairy's spell.
His leprechaun's mischievous spell
Kind regards
tracey
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Comment Written 05-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
Thank you so much for this review. I am pleased you think it does the business. My adaptations were designed to ease the stilted feel that repetition can result in.
reply by trimple on 05-Feb-2019