Foundational Strength
In the end, they're all we have...33 total reviews
Comment from way2gokevs
Simple words that mean so much to our memories. Love it, thanks very much for sharing, You should do well in the contest, best of luck.
Have a great day.
Cheers.
Kev.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Simple words that mean so much to our memories. Love it, thanks very much for sharing, You should do well in the contest, best of luck.
Have a great day.
Cheers.
Kev.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Thanx for the read and review, Kev -- I am so glad you enjoyed....guess I was feeling a bit nostalgic with all my 'big' boys coming home for the holidays. ;) ;) Thanx for stopping in and know that you're welcome to stop by anytime, sir! :) ;) Sending special Christmas-Season wishes to you and yours -- take care! ;) ;)
Comment from Ms. Snyder
Absolutely adorable! The poem and the picture fit perfectly and the 5-3-5 is on point. I like that you take some ideas that are universal and put them in a perspective of common sense as well as functionality with a childlike wonder and appreciation. I can see that if I were looking at this from any age it would clearly be a philosophical poem with commentary. Cheers, Fonda
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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Absolutely adorable! The poem and the picture fit perfectly and the 5-3-5 is on point. I like that you take some ideas that are universal and put them in a perspective of common sense as well as functionality with a childlike wonder and appreciation. I can see that if I were looking at this from any age it would clearly be a philosophical poem with commentary. Cheers, Fonda
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Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Thanx for the read and review, Fonda -- I am so glad you enjoyed....guess I was feeling a bit nostalgic with all my 'big' boys coming home for the holidays. ;) ;) Sending special Christmas-Season wishes to you and yours -- take care! ;) ;)
Comment from lyenochka
What a clever way to say it! Yes, to have wonderful memories, we need to make them. It takes committed time and effort and sometimes patience, too. Best wishes to you in the contest!
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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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What a clever way to say it! Yes, to have wonderful memories, we need to make them. It takes committed time and effort and sometimes patience, too. Best wishes to you in the contest!
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Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Thanx for the read and review, Helen -- I am so glad you enjoyed....guess I was feeling a bit nostalgic with all my 'big' boys coming home for the holidays. ;) ;) Sending special Christmas-Season wishes to you and yours -- take care! ;) ;)