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OMG I wrote a poetry book

Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Once Upon Cary Grant"
A collection of award winning poems

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Comment from meeshu
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This is a pleasure to read. Your writing is smooth and the titles seem to fit right in. one of the best of these I've seen. good luck..

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Thank you, this was a blast to write. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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You worked a lot of his movies into this. It's a great contest entry and should do well in the voting booth. A lot of writers have signed up for this one. Good luck.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Rene Ravensdale
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It is quiet fun!
Can you blame him?
The least she could do, is tell him I don't love you,
And then go and cheat!
If he can't be with her in life then he can be with her in hell,
Except, the 'slime' will probably be there to interrupt again, lol!
Thanks for sharing !
Keep on the good writing

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Thank you Rene, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from A. Willow Bends
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GREAT job! Wasn't this a fun contest? I entered it also. Will not give away any details. You did a fantastic job. Love it! It may get my vote. Will not promise until I see the spectrum of choices, but this is super. Creative, funny, formatted well with a super choice of photo. Good luck!
W.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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I had fun reading your poem. I enjoyed the light heartened. You did a great job putting the titles into a bit of story to share. I hope you do well in the contest. Good luck to you.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Thank you Cindy, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello Mystery Writer!
Kudos! I loved reading your poem. Creative and fun...even if you left out "Arsenic and Old Lace!" I only mention that as my first acting role was that of the ingenue, Elaine Harper in that play... but I digress. The fact that you mention that your poem "doesn't fit any meter models and rhymes are forced" is secondary to the fact the your poem is pure fun! And I agree, that that is what counts!
Thank you for sharing!

diane

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Thank you Diane. Arsenic and Old Lace is also one of my favorites. But my very favorite is Topper and it wasn't on the list. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I think you did a brilliant job for this contest! LOL, you told a story of a wife cheating and how you killed them both, and then died having the death penalty thrown at you. Wow, that was one heck of a contest entry! Well done and good luck! :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Thank you Sandra. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Well, I had fun reading it. You did a great job with the many titles you incorporated. You told your story well. I saw nothing to change. I liked the rhymes, it was smooth reading, and the picture is great. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Thank you Jan. The five stars are appreciated.
Comment from jenintorre
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I think this is very clever and certainly fits the criteria for the competition. I wish you lots of luck with it. Well done. Best wishes. Jen.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Thank you Jen. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Impromptu Scribe
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A great entry for the CGMT poetry contest :) A very creative composition and none the poorer even if you felt compelled to veer away from strict meter or rhyming. I can see you had fun writing it. I certainly had fun reading it :) Good luck in the contest. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    I'm glad you enjoyed it, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
reply by Impromptu Scribe on 30-Nov-2018
    You are very welcome :) Best wishes