I Skip Among the Stars
A Quatrain with an ALMOST Chain Rhyme33 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is awesome, Yvonne. If it had been entered in any contest, I know it would win. I love the presentation--the color scheme, the super chain rhymes, the awesome picture, and the overall fun 'message.' While we can't literally skip among the stars, we can enjoy their beauty every night and dream of all the wonderful things you have mentioned. This is one of my favorite poems of yours. Great job and thanks for sharing a beauty. Jan
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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This is awesome, Yvonne. If it had been entered in any contest, I know it would win. I love the presentation--the color scheme, the super chain rhymes, the awesome picture, and the overall fun 'message.' While we can't literally skip among the stars, we can enjoy their beauty every night and dream of all the wonderful things you have mentioned. This is one of my favorite poems of yours. Great job and thanks for sharing a beauty. Jan
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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Thank you. You did a lot to support and give me ideas.
Comment from Kerry Foley
Hello there, Yvonne, this is such a fantastic and most adorable poem. I love it.
This gives such a happy feeling, you had me in smiles at the first lines"
"I skip among the stars 'most every night
when I can catch a moonbeam's trailing light,"
To just skip amongst the stars is sounds so innocent, carefree and cheerful.
Oh, my it's almost a full moon, I must get my cauldron and go out for a spell. Heh-heh. I think Halloween around the corner brings out the witch, Hahaha!
Nicely done. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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Hello there, Yvonne, this is such a fantastic and most adorable poem. I love it.
This gives such a happy feeling, you had me in smiles at the first lines"
"I skip among the stars 'most every night
when I can catch a moonbeam's trailing light,"
To just skip amongst the stars is sounds so innocent, carefree and cheerful.
Oh, my it's almost a full moon, I must get my cauldron and go out for a spell. Heh-heh. I think Halloween around the corner brings out the witch, Hahaha!
Nicely done. ~Kerry
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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LOL. I don't believe there's a witch in you. Thank you for this fantastic review.
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lol, you're so very welcome:)) Enjoy your weekend.
Comment from BeasPeas
So well done, Yvonne. I re-read the instructions over a few times. I admire you for your knowledge of the different forms. A charming poem, well illustrated and rhymed. Marilyn
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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So well done, Yvonne. I re-read the instructions over a few times. I admire you for your knowledge of the different forms. A charming poem, well illustrated and rhymed. Marilyn
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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Thank you, Marilyn. I value your opinion, so I really appreciate your comments.
