Comment from Monica L. Moraca

Excellent

I love it the way it is! It made me laugh and was able to hear the songs in my head as I read each title you noted. Well done!! Best of luck in the contest!
Monica

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate you ttaking the time to read and review my work.

Comment from Tia Attwood

Excellent

Hi

What a fun filled poem. This is a great entry into the Disco inferno poem contest.
had to lough with your last line. i often say to my kids that i dance like a duck.

great job and good luck in the contest.

regards
Tia

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018

Thanks for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.

Comment from victor 66

Excellent

I found your Disco Inferno Poem writing prompt entry original, humous and engaging. Art, poetry is a subjective taste. Then again I'm not a true poet. I don't necessarily know what's good, I just know what I like. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018

I'm the same way I don't know what's good but I do know what I like. Thanks for reading and reviewing my work.

reply by victor 66 on 16-Oct-2018

You are most welcome, Mystery Writer.

Comment from Tina Crute

Excellent

Except the part about getting in her pants, which I think is unnecessary, this is wonderful! I am old, and know every one of these songs LOL. This is extremely creative and I really enjoyed reading it. Good job!

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018

Thank you, I'm sorry if that offended you. Should I put a sex warning on it? Thanks for reading and reviewing my work.

reply by Tina Crute on 15-Oct-2018

I was a bit offended
Because it was unexpected,
so thank you for not
being mad:)
I just think it's so light and
funny and that line
changes the tone a bit, so for me,
it broke up the rhythm .
If you keep it in,
yes maybe put a warning
on it? It's really great
without that phrase honestly
it's a really funny,
refreshing poem!
I'm going to show it
to my husband tonight
as he loves loves
loves music!

reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018

I went in and changed it not a big fix. I?m not a dirty writer I was in a hurry to get done when I wrote it.

reply by Tina Crute on 15-Oct-2018

I will go back and
check it out tonight. Like I
said I want to show my
husband he will get a real
kick out of it! If you wrote this
in a hurry, you must
love music too.

reply by Tina Crute on 15-Oct-2018

I showed your poem to
my hubby. He loved it! I don't
think this was an easy
assignment/contest.

reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018

It one of the easier ones I entered, compare to 75 word flash fiction this was a breeze. I'm glad your hubby liked it.

reply by Tina Crute on 15-Oct-2018

Flash fiction...yeah sounds
tough....not for the faint
of heart!

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Fantastic! You have just mentioned everything I loved about disco...pleaseeee bring it back. So much fun was had during that era, I wish they would play more disco, the world would be a better place. Great contest entry...best of luck.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018

Cool Screen name, fits right in to the theme. Thanks for reading and reviewing my work.

Comment from Insider98

Excellent

This is a poem with a really nice flow! It has a story, and nice references. I'm new to poetry myself, so I don't know how to feel exactly about writing every verse separately. (No stanzas, I mean.) Still, It's a good write! Nice job!

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

I like it, but I'm not a true poet, I just play one on my Google Machine. live long and prosper and don't ever stop Playin' That Funky Music, White Boy..

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018

Good one. I forgot my favorite song from that era. Thanks for reading and reviewing my work.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

You brought back lots of memories of the Disco Era and some of the great songs. Your Speaker is kind of goofy but fun to meet. Very enjoyable.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018

I am goofy, but that helps me write. This was fun to write and it's only my third poem. It brought back some memories for me too because that was my era. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Not all poems have to be metered with strict syllable count, Mystery Author. Your disco contest entry reads smoothly as is--like free verse. I like how you used bold font for the titles of the songs. Good job and best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018

Thanks Jan, it was fun to write. I figured I'd better bold the song titles cuz the young'uns wouldn't have any idea what i was talking about. Thanks for reading it and the great review.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written spontaneous and creative poem about the disco era that most of us seem to grow up in. It seems to me you have a great time remembering the disco era.

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 Comment Written 15-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018

I did. That was a fun poem to write. Thanks for reading and reviewing my work.