Carolyn
Her passing took not long32 total reviews
Comment from meeshu
This is a very fine piece of writing. It has a wonderful cadence and pace. Excellent verse and verbiage. Well done, Loanna. a tough thing to have to go through. I can still feel it and it's been twenty years. I am sorry. I wish you well in all your future endeavors.......................meeshu
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This is a very fine piece of writing. It has a wonderful cadence and pace. Excellent verse and verbiage. Well done, Loanna. a tough thing to have to go through. I can still feel it and it's been twenty years. I am sorry. I wish you well in all your future endeavors.......................meeshu
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Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
Comment from pome lover
well written free verse.
I am sorry that you lost your friend.
Your reference to her being melancholy leads me to think her death was her own doing. That IS sad. It seems the confidence she helped you with couldn't help her.
Or maybe I'm "reading" this wrong.
At any rate, good job. You expressed your feelings well.
Pome lover
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well written free verse.
I am sorry that you lost your friend.
Your reference to her being melancholy leads me to think her death was her own doing. That IS sad. It seems the confidence she helped you with couldn't help her.
Or maybe I'm "reading" this wrong.
At any rate, good job. You expressed your feelings well.
Pome lover
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Comment Written 06-Oct-2018