What You Express That's Your Base
A 4 Line Poem; You're sum of words, scribe and or expression133 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This acrostic poem has a thought-provoking theme. People WILL, of
course, remember us for our words and deeds. If we have intelligence
that seldom shows itself, if we go about doing and saying dumb things,
people will--and righty so--remember us as dummies!
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This acrostic poem has a thought-provoking theme. People WILL, of
course, remember us for our words and deeds. If we have intelligence
that seldom shows itself, if we go about doing and saying dumb things,
people will--and righty so--remember us as dummies!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
Comment from rspoet
Hello Alcreator,
You've written an excellent poem with a solid message for the contest
that appears to meet all the requirements.
"The truth will set you free" seems to be the essence of the theme,
so speak carefully.
Nicely done
Robert
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Hello Alcreator,
You've written an excellent poem with a solid message for the contest
that appears to meet all the requirements.
"The truth will set you free" seems to be the essence of the theme,
so speak carefully.
Nicely done
Robert
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
Comment from Cindy Warren
Oh, I hope that's not entirely true. I've been known to pen some pure nonsense. I hope it doesn't say I'm totally nuts. Good luck in the contest.
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Oh, I hope that's not entirely true. I've been known to pen some pure nonsense. I hope it doesn't say I'm totally nuts. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
Comment from Darlene BoClair
I like the structure of your poem and the question the picture ask.
I respect your humble biblical opinion. This may be the answer for many but not for me. You've challenge my mindful thoughts and there is no added work needed for this writing prompt entry.
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I like the structure of your poem and the question the picture ask.
I respect your humble biblical opinion. This may be the answer for many but not for me. You've challenge my mindful thoughts and there is no added work needed for this writing prompt entry.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements beautifully with a correct word count. The content is a sound piece of worthy advice for all to heed and follow. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully with a correct word count. The content is a sound piece of worthy advice for all to heed and follow. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
I have been in the company of a few who grope for words they are not used to because they are not happy about transparency. Those types are easy to spot. The rest, yes, what they say reveals their inner being, if they say too much. Then there are the quiet ones, who rarely speak and they are our mysterious ones. Look at all the explanation just from reading 15 words. Well done, I enjoyed your intentions.
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I have been in the company of a few who grope for words they are not used to because they are not happy about transparency. Those types are easy to spot. The rest, yes, what they say reveals their inner being, if they say too much. Then there are the quiet ones, who rarely speak and they are our mysterious ones. Look at all the explanation just from reading 15 words. Well done, I enjoyed your intentions.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Dr. Al,
I agree wholeheartedly with the sentiments expressed in your poetic offering.
I must offer, however, that the phrasing is a bit awkward to me in the last line. I realize you are saying we are all the sum of what we speak, scribe, or express before we leave this world. The last line just doesn't flow very well for me...
thank you for sharing!
diane
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Hello Dr. Al,
I agree wholeheartedly with the sentiments expressed in your poetic offering.
I must offer, however, that the phrasing is a bit awkward to me in the last line. I realize you are saying we are all the sum of what we speak, scribe, or express before we leave this world. The last line just doesn't flow very well for me...
thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
Comment from LisaMay
What I take from your 15-word poem is that it pays to remember that here on earth while we live our being is revealed by how we express ourselves in all our forms of communication.... but of course, you have expressed it more clearly and simply that me!!
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What I take from your 15-word poem is that it pays to remember that here on earth while we live our being is revealed by how we express ourselves in all our forms of communication.... but of course, you have expressed it more clearly and simply that me!!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
Comment from Josh Walters
Simple and to the point. For many of us the only thing that will be remembered is what we write and the things we say to those that live on, or something like that. Nicely done.
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Simple and to the point. For many of us the only thing that will be remembered is what we write and the things we say to those that live on, or something like that. Nicely done.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
Comment from Diana L Crawford
No truer words have ever been spoken! If only people realized how much what comes out of us determines what happens to us and whether we live a loving, joyful life or one full of pain and sorrow! We are what we think!
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No truer words have ever been spoken! If only people realized how much what comes out of us determines what happens to us and whether we live a loving, joyful life or one full of pain and sorrow! We are what we think!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019