God Omnipotent Deeds
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Comment from LIJ Red
An excellent forty word (although I never actually counted the words, it looks very close to me)summary of things we need to do to improve a world that is tense and unhappy for no real and valid reasons.
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An excellent forty word (although I never actually counted the words, it looks very close to me)summary of things we need to do to improve a world that is tense and unhappy for no real and valid reasons.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
Comment from Therese103
This is a very good and comprehensive work. I found it very helpful that you put the key words of the writing prompt in red. Thank you for sharing!
Blessings.
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This is a very good and comprehensive work. I found it very helpful that you put the key words of the writing prompt in red. Thank you for sharing!
Blessings.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
Comment from jusylee72
Make a better world, yes it does start with each one of us and the simplest kindness we offer to others. We live in a great word we just need to open our eyes and appreciate it with all of our souls. Thank you for the reminder.
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Make a better world, yes it does start with each one of us and the simplest kindness we offer to others. We live in a great word we just need to open our eyes and appreciate it with all of our souls. Thank you for the reminder.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
Comment from Janice Ernest
I like this piece of prose very much. It is well spoken and meaningful. The words are nicely placed and used appropriately. It communicates exactly what the author intended.
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I like this piece of prose very much. It is well spoken and meaningful. The words are nicely placed and used appropriately. It communicates exactly what the author intended.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2018
Comment from robyn corum
A.,
This seems to be a continuing topic with you -- but I have to protest a bit. *smile* You warn us to stop all this criminal activity - but I don't think there are really a lot of 'criminals' here -- most of us are here a good part of the day, so how could we be out doing these horrible things?? Just a thought. Thanks!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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A.,
This seems to be a continuing topic with you -- but I have to protest a bit. *smile* You warn us to stop all this criminal activity - but I don't think there are really a lot of 'criminals' here -- most of us are here a good part of the day, so how could we be out doing these horrible things?? Just a thought. Thanks!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this entertaining review I appreciate.
Comment from Delores Poindexter
This poem to me shows what is wrong with society today, and what we can do to stop some crimes. Of course crimes will never disappear by we can get rid of them one at a time but having more values in life and trusting people
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This poem to me shows what is wrong with society today, and what we can do to stop some crimes. Of course crimes will never disappear by we can get rid of them one at a time but having more values in life and trusting people
Comment Written 11-Aug-2018
Comment from Kacie Evans
Very well done! I 100% agree with your words. Wish that everyone felt that way. This world would be a fabulous place to live. I have tried writing these prompts and they are harder than you think. You did very well. Thank you for sharing.
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Very well done! I 100% agree with your words. Wish that everyone felt that way. This world would be a fabulous place to live. I have tried writing these prompts and they are harder than you think. You did very well. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2018
Comment from Adri7enne
Sounds like a fine idea. If the world could practice more patience and loving kindness all would benefit. I can't dispute any of your ideas in this poem. I hope you do well in the contest.
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Sounds like a fine idea. If the world could practice more patience and loving kindness all would benefit. I can't dispute any of your ideas in this poem. I hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2018
Comment from meeshu
a strong write, ALCREATOR. if you look more closely, you will find that 97% of your fellow humans are living their lives exactly as you prescribe. we aren't such a bad race really, the 3% get on the news 24/7. too easy to extrapolate..........meeshu
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a strong write, ALCREATOR. if you look more closely, you will find that 97% of your fellow humans are living their lives exactly as you prescribe. we aren't such a bad race really, the 3% get on the news 24/7. too easy to extrapolate..........meeshu
Comment Written 10-Aug-2018
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
You have said quite a lot on a very serious subject in so few words. A powerful commentary. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
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You have said quite a lot on a very serious subject in so few words. A powerful commentary. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 10-Aug-2018