Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about the sneaky disappearing gnome that seems to be shy and hide for everyone but you. His face doesnot show on the photo you have just take with your camera.

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They'd catch they[the] sneaky little gnome.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018

Thank you for the help, I made that correction. Thanks for the read and great review. Rox

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

I love this funny bit of poetry. The ending is truly inspirational on your part. It is something different in the way of a story. It gave me my laugh for the day. I wish you the best in the contest. It looks like a winner to me.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018

Thank you so much. I am glad it made you laugh.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hahahahaha, Roxanna, this is priceless. I sure hope it will win the contest. What a breath of fresh air, and a such a good and fun story within a poem. Only regret is, I've no six left. Squandered them all away this week.
They'd catch they sneaky little gnome. = They'd catch the sneaky little gnome.
Good luck. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018

Thank you so much Ulla. I made that correction too. Thanks for the great review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I like to know I gave people a bit of joy in their day. =}

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Isn't it just simply wonderful to allow our imagination to roam too! isn't that what poetry gives us pemission to do- transports us to another place - well done

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018

Thank you so much Zanya.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

There are one or two gnomes wondering about my home town but I never admit I've seen them! I've called a lawyer for you by the way Roxanna, he he he, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 16-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018

Thank you so much. I hope the lawyer gets her soon,. I'm sick of this gnome. =} Thanks for the great review. Rox

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

This is wonderful! I got a chuckle reading your clever verse and its colorful phrases. Good job. I would add that the first time you mention the wandering gnome, (in the third stanza) you spell it "wondering". Just a thought. Good job and good luck.!

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 Comment Written 16-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018

Hi, I think we reviewed each other poems at the same tine. =] Thank you for catching that error. Thank you for the review and hope you do well in the contest. I think. =} Rox