Comment from pome lover

Excellent

I love the pretty picture you paint of the different flowers and robins;
The green peeking through brown
all the beauty of Spring--
then,
weeds.
A very good kyrielle. Most enjoyable.
Katharine - pome lover

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018

Thank you, Katharine, for reviewing my spring poem and your kind praise.

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

This is a good entry for the contest. You get a virtual six stars from me for this one. I think this is the second contest entry I have reviewed. Don't let the Creeping Charlie's get you! Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018

I am delighted you shared and reviewed my poem, Pamusart. Many thanks for your kind praise and the virtual six.

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

excellent it just feels like springtime. very well rhymed.
also good use of the Kyrielle format. good luck in the contest.
"Lamentably here come the weeds." my favorite line.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018

Thank you for sharing my poem, meeshu, and for specifying your favorite line.

reply by meeshu on 31-Mar-2018

Y.W.....meeshu

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written poem in the Kyrielle format for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and lovely art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018

I am delighted you enjoyed my poem and the artwork, Teri. Thank you for your kind praise and best wishes.

Comment from Katya

Excellent

I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Yes, spring means dandelions and Creeping Charlie coming along too, not just crocuses and robins. Makes my toes tingle! and I liked the picture.

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 Comment Written 30-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018

I am delighted you enjoyed the poem and the artwork, Katya. Thank you for your review.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 'Write a Kyrielle' writing prompt.
Your verse about the coming of spring is well told.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 30-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018

Thank you very much, Sharon, for your kind praise.