haiku (black squirrel scurries)
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Comment from RGstar
Once again, as I have said before, so difficult to judge these, but they do create a moment of humour or wonder, perhaps so designed.
Nicely done.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Once again, as I have said before, so difficult to judge these, but they do create a moment of humour or wonder, perhaps so designed.
Nicely done.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 26-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Hello Ron,
These are tricky to pen; that is for certain.
On a lighter note, my marauder is back today...and with friends!
Thank you for your thoughtful and kind review!
diane
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is such a cute write and the squirrels love to hide their stash of food just in case there is no food in the feeder! How do they remember where they have buried it all? Fabulous art work and a great entry for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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This is such a cute write and the squirrels love to hide their stash of food just in case there is no food in the feeder! How do they remember where they have buried it all? Fabulous art work and a great entry for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Hello Dolly!
So pleased you enjoy. I find haiku really challenging to pen.
And my friend is back...with his family today!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Edwin Hofert
I don't know how you do it. But I will keep watching til I figure it out lol. Great poem and how true it is. Good luck in the contest! And good luck staying on top of that hungry squirrel. I wonder? Could this poem have also worked as if from the squirrels eyes lol.
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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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I don't know how you do it. But I will keep watching til I figure it out lol. Great poem and how true it is. Good luck in the contest! And good luck staying on top of that hungry squirrel. I wonder? Could this poem have also worked as if from the squirrels eyes lol.
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Hi Edwin,
He's back.
With a boat load of friends.
That is one fluffy squirrel!
Thank you for the kind and complimentary review!
diane
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry writing prompt.
Well said in you few well chosen words.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry writing prompt.
Well said in you few well chosen words.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Hi Sharon!
Thank you for your kind review and wishes!
diane