This Time - That Time 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "The Fire"Veronica is sent back again
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Sandra, I love it. Veronica is now right back to when she last started to time travel. The wine being pored into her glass! What a dramatic chapter this was, so much going on with the fire and all. Well, they saved the day and Sir John as well. I can't wait to reading on. Hugs from a much milder Costa Blanca. Ulla xxxx
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Hi Sandra, I love it. Veronica is now right back to when she last started to time travel. The wine being pored into her glass! What a dramatic chapter this was, so much going on with the fire and all. Well, they saved the day and Sir John as well. I can't wait to reading on. Hugs from a much milder Costa Blanca. Ulla xxxx
Comment Written 11-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Aw, thank you, Ulla, so very much for the lovely 6 stars and fabulous review. Your support means so much to me, my friend. Big hugs!! :) Sandra xx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
That fire is over and only Sir John was injured. I'm not too worried about that. He's not a nice person anyway. I do like this story.
Galvanised into action, (great description)
As it is, it's still standing and still occupied in my time., so you can stop worrying.' (removed the period after time, the comma is enough)
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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That fire is over and only Sir John was injured. I'm not too worried about that. He's not a nice person anyway. I do like this story.
Galvanised into action, (great description)
As it is, it's still standing and still occupied in my time., so you can stop worrying.' (removed the period after time, the comma is enough)
Comment Written 11-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much, Barbara, for your really lovely review and all those stars! I really appreciate your continued support, my friends. Also, thank you for spotting the extra period, it sneaked in there somehow! LOL, I've removed it now. Well spotted, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
OH wow jumped again and what a story of maybe a little peace being started in the players? NO problems noted and very well written
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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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OH wow jumped again and what a story of maybe a little peace being started in the players? NO problems noted and very well written
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Comment Written 11-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much, Barb. I get so worried when I first post it in case I've missed some errors! Yes, she's jumped, now for more research! Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xxxx
