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Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "The Gift"A Romantic, Superhero-like, Geek Horror story.
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Comment from beizanten
an interesting and intriguing background summary, you capture my attention. A well written first paragraph, the emotion flow well. One question what power did he have
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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an interesting and intriguing background summary, you capture my attention. A well written first paragraph, the emotion flow well. One question what power did he have
Comment Written 02-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Thank you! I appreciate your motivating compliment and rating very much. His power is hinted in the first chapter entitled "Shadows." Thank you again. I hope you have time to read more!
Comment from DonandVicki
An excellent and moving story. A very nicely composed flash fiction horror story that is very original and scary. I wish you luck in the contest. Don and Vicki.
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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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An excellent and moving story. A very nicely composed flash fiction horror story that is very original and scary. I wish you luck in the contest. Don and Vicki.
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Comment Written 02-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Thank you! Your encouragement and positive rating are very helpful in completing this project. I hope you take time to read chapter one entitled "Shadows."