Was it a killing or murder?
...a brief lesson for the Prosecutor35 total reviews
Comment from Bichon
Wow, I did not expect that ending! A very good flash fiction for sure.
"Do you know the difference is between killing and murder, " should it be "Do you know what the difference is"?
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017
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Wow, I did not expect that ending! A very good flash fiction for sure.
"Do you know the difference is between killing and murder, " should it be "Do you know what the difference is"?
Comment Written 16-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017
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Hi Chloe; thank you so much for catching that!! I did go and make the edit and I managed to keep the word count to 102.
~patty~
Comment from Hitcher
Your little 100 word flash fiction story piece gives the reader a glimpse into the mind of a murderer/strangler, so maybe even a mass murderer... evil creatures those. Nicely done friend, good luck!
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017
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Your little 100 word flash fiction story piece gives the reader a glimpse into the mind of a murderer/strangler, so maybe even a mass murderer... evil creatures those. Nicely done friend, good luck!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017
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Hi there; thank you so much for the great review of this piece. I guess I've been watching too much 'Law and Order.'
~patty~
Comment from F. Wehr3
Nice job with this short piece, Patty. I enjoyed it. Even though the plot is given away by the title, I felt it still had punch.
Good luck in the contest,
Russell
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017
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Nice job with this short piece, Patty. I enjoyed it. Even though the plot is given away by the title, I felt it still had punch.
Good luck in the contest,
Russell
Comment Written 16-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017
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Hi Russell;
thank you so much for the lovely review. Now, you have me thinking I should change the title -- maybe...
~patty~
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written hundred word flash fiction. It is not common that someone admits they have murdered someone. It is hard to accept one human is capable to murder another in cold blood.
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017
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A very well-written hundred word flash fiction. It is not common that someone admits they have murdered someone. It is hard to accept one human is capable to murder another in cold blood.
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Comment Written 16-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017
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Hi Sandra;
thank you so much for your review and comments. I was inspired to write this after watching hours of 'Law and Order.'
~patty~
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Patty,
Wow, this is a very intense flash fiction. It's hard to engage the reader in 100 words but you did it. Good job, honey. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017
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Hello, Patty,
Wow, this is a very intense flash fiction. It's hard to engage the reader in 100 words but you did it. Good job, honey. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 16-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017
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Hi Gypsy;
thank you so much for the wonderful review. I was hoping to accomplish just that!
~patty~