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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hi Bill. I think this is an adorable tale. Why are you writing so many about the sloth. Is it going to be a picture book story? I really love them. Good luck. xoxo deborah

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 Comment Written 27-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
    I have done ten on horses, spiders, octopi, and have one more to do on these guys.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute and well written poem you have penned for the contest. How in the world did you find so many pictures of the sloth? You used very good descriptive wording and rhymes. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

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 Comment Written 27-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
    Thanks, Teri. I found these on Pinterest.