This Time - That Time 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "This Time - That Time 2 part 7"Veronica is sent back again
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Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing this latest chapter in the story. Frances would still have a hard time if he were born in present times. Too many people remain uneducated and fear anything that seems the least bit different.
You've done a great job relating the story to James and Mildred. I am glad Veronica has understanding people to turn to when she returns from 'her travels.'
Looking forward to the next chapter,
~patty~
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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thank you for sharing this latest chapter in the story. Frances would still have a hard time if he were born in present times. Too many people remain uneducated and fear anything that seems the least bit different.
You've done a great job relating the story to James and Mildred. I am glad Veronica has understanding people to turn to when she returns from 'her travels.'
Looking forward to the next chapter,
~patty~
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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You are so right, I've been researching this and find that many albinos have received some terrible abuse. Such a shame. It sort of makes a mockery of the name, 'humanity' doesn't it. Thank you, Patty, for your lovely input, I really appreciate you. Big hugs. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from apky
Some excellent writing as usual.
I think I missed chapters 5 and 6 which I may have to go back to because I enjoy this story tremendously and don't want to miss a single post.
Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Some excellent writing as usual.
I think I missed chapters 5 and 6 which I may have to go back to because I enjoy this story tremendously and don't want to miss a single post.
Well done.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Hi apky, no you didn't miss part 6, I remember your review very well. Perhaps you've forgotten some of it. There are so many great books being written on here. Thank you, I am so pleased you did enjoy this part and hope you continue to read the rest. I really value your input, it means a lot to me. Thank you, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Asyraf N. Jamsari
This is actually so sad. I think you creatively managed to express the emotions very well here. I enjoy the characters and the dialogues are nicely thought. Good choice of words. Looking forward for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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This is actually so sad. I think you creatively managed to express the emotions very well here. I enjoy the characters and the dialogues are nicely thought. Good choice of words. Looking forward for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Yes, it is sad, Frances has a tough road ahead of him, but Veronica will be there for him. And he has Meg. Thank you so much for reading my story, Asyraf, I really appreciate your review. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from pbomar1115
Now, Veronica can go back and forth into the past to the exact moment. Her mission niow is to save an albino child. As Lady Gwendolyn lay on her dying bed, Veronica was bothered her anxious. She discovered together with her husband and her friend what Lady Gwendolyn feared.
Phillip
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Now, Veronica can go back and forth into the past to the exact moment. Her mission niow is to save an albino child. As Lady Gwendolyn lay on her dying bed, Veronica was bothered her anxious. She discovered together with her husband and her friend what Lady Gwendolyn feared.
Phillip
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much, Phillip, for another of your lovely reviews. I'm so pleased you are continuing to enjoy my story! :) Sandra xxx
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You're welcome, Sandra.
Phillip
Comment from aryr
That was a great twist you added and an interesting touch. You have presented a great deal of suspense since no one really knows what the connection is- even the council are in a state of wonderment. At least for a while Frances will have Meg's protection and care but Sir John can over rule that situation at any time. I have had what I call the privilege of taking care of an albino child and young adult at separate times in my nursing career. Both were full blown and the young adult (mid 20's) had impressive pink eyes whereas the child who was about 5 had the tell tale red eyes. What was great was that they both had great family /friend support. Okay back to your chapter, it was great, it was well done and had tons of suspense. Great job. Thanks Sandra.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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That was a great twist you added and an interesting touch. You have presented a great deal of suspense since no one really knows what the connection is- even the council are in a state of wonderment. At least for a while Frances will have Meg's protection and care but Sir John can over rule that situation at any time. I have had what I call the privilege of taking care of an albino child and young adult at separate times in my nursing career. Both were full blown and the young adult (mid 20's) had impressive pink eyes whereas the child who was about 5 had the tell tale red eyes. What was great was that they both had great family /friend support. Okay back to your chapter, it was great, it was well done and had tons of suspense. Great job. Thanks Sandra.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Since introducing my albino lad into the story, I've learnt so much about them. It's such a shame some people still regard them as something to be wary of. I'm sure you already know they are no different from the rest of us. I've never met an albino but would like to. I'm glad the people you knew had lots of family support. Thank you so much, Alie, for this lovely, and very informative, review. I'm so pleased you liked the way I've written it. Big hugs! :) Sandra xxx
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You are most welcome Sandra. It is a great twist, big hugs in return. :-)
Comment from royowen
Ah so that's the problem, the child's an albino, I've never actually seen one, but have on documentaries. I'm a redhead, and apparently a dying breed. It's a sticky situation confronting Veronica, but we have a number of "watchers" that you've introduced to your series, but that makes more sense, do they have other "recruits" like Veronica Sandra? Well done, excellent tale weaving, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Ah so that's the problem, the child's an albino, I've never actually seen one, but have on documentaries. I'm a redhead, and apparently a dying breed. It's a sticky situation confronting Veronica, but we have a number of "watchers" that you've introduced to your series, but that makes more sense, do they have other "recruits" like Veronica Sandra? Well done, excellent tale weaving, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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A redhead! They are supposed to have quite a vivacious nature! I'm sure you are fun to be around, Roy. Thank you so much, my friend, for continuing to read my story, I love your input. Big hugs, and much love always. :) Sandra xx
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Not red anymore....the colour drained out...heh heh
Comment from c_lucas
Man's basic nature
Fears the Unknown
"The only thing there is to fear
Is Fear itself." (Roosevelt)
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Man's basic nature
Fears the Unknown
"The only thing there is to fear
Is Fear itself." (Roosevelt)
***
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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That is so true, Charles, and we are all guilty at times for falling into that trap. Thank you so much, my friend, for you lovely thoughts on my story. I really appreciate them. :) Sandra xx
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You're welcome, Sandra. Charlie
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Oh, I am so enjoying this 'time travel' story...it is utterly thrilling! Truly fantastic I am enjoying it so much! I cannot wait to read more so hurry as fast as you can to post more I love your writing! Kindest regards and well done meia xx
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Oh, I am so enjoying this 'time travel' story...it is utterly thrilling! Truly fantastic I am enjoying it so much! I cannot wait to read more so hurry as fast as you can to post more I love your writing! Kindest regards and well done meia xx
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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What a lovely thing to say, Meia, thank you so much! I'll write as fast as I can, lol! Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from rosehill (Wendy)
Enjoyed the PTB's. Were they a part of the first book? If not, hey are a great addition to this, adding both new intrigue and the ability to clear things up at the same time. Clever. I like the instantaneous leave/return as it really does allow for more action with less reaction and effect on the current time line. Well done Sandra. I am still a Time fan. - Wendy
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Enjoyed the PTB's. Were they a part of the first book? If not, hey are a great addition to this, adding both new intrigue and the ability to clear things up at the same time. Clever. I like the instantaneous leave/return as it really does allow for more action with less reaction and effect on the current time line. Well done Sandra. I am still a Time fan. - Wendy
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Hi Wendy, no they weren't in the first book, I didn't think of them until this book. I think it makes this one different to the last one. I am really pleased you liked the idea, it means I can play around with the characters more. Thank you, my friend, I loved your review! :) Sandra xxxx
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Sandra. Oh my! What a great story line you have going on here. The picture presentation is fantastic. I think I might have to go back to the beginning to catch some of the nuances of the story so far, but girl! Wow it is a beauty! Loved the chapter, felt real and like I was truly participating in the write. xoxo Kiwi
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Hi Sandra. Oh my! What a great story line you have going on here. The picture presentation is fantastic. I think I might have to go back to the beginning to catch some of the nuances of the story so far, but girl! Wow it is a beauty! Loved the chapter, felt real and like I was truly participating in the write. xoxo Kiwi
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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That is such a compliment, Kiwi! Thank you so much for this review, you have put such a big smile on my face. Thank you so very much!!! Big hugs. :) Sandra xxxx
