2017 JAPANESE POETRY
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "senryu (minuscule)"A collection of Japanese poetry
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, we are so tiny in the big picture of it all, the world being three-fourths water and filled with creatures bigger than school buses. At least of those we have seen, but those we haven't may be taller than sky scrappers. Thanks for sharing another fine poem. :-)
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Yes, we are so tiny in the big picture of it all, the world being three-fourths water and filled with creatures bigger than school buses. At least of those we have seen, but those we haven't may be taller than sky scrappers. Thanks for sharing another fine poem. :-)
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :)
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Comment from Dean Kuch
Ya know, I always feel much the same way, dear Gypsy.
Standing on the beach--looking out over the vast expanse of the ocean...
It truly makes us realize how insignificant we are in the grand scheme of things and how we pertain to the universe.
Our problems seem smaller, less significant.
I think that's a good thing, and I KNOW that this is a great senryu.
Bravo...
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Ya know, I always feel much the same way, dear Gypsy.
Standing on the beach--looking out over the vast expanse of the ocean...
It truly makes us realize how insignificant we are in the grand scheme of things and how we pertain to the universe.
Our problems seem smaller, less significant.
I think that's a good thing, and I KNOW that this is a great senryu.
Bravo...
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Thank you, Dean, I can always count on you to 'get it'. Not everyone understands I am talking about Mother Nature. Oh well. People seem to like it so I ain't complaining. LoL Thank you very much for the generous six stars review.
Gypsy hugs
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It was entirely my pleasure. :)
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. This is lovely and most well written. I enjoyed reading the poem and I can understand why the ocean could affect you in this manner. The artworks is lovely and compliments the writing.
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Excellent. This is lovely and most well written. I enjoyed reading the poem and I can understand why the ocean could affect you in this manner. The artworks is lovely and compliments the writing.
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :)
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Comment from sheena121
A very nice, gentle poem a good Haiku it is naturalistic. Good choice of words and the picture makes you think of the meaning of the words. Well written.
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A very nice, gentle poem a good Haiku it is naturalistic. Good choice of words and the picture makes you think of the meaning of the words. Well written.
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Comment Written 02-May-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :)
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Comment from TAB_that's me
Yes, I know what you mean about feeling minuscule at the ocean.
Good minimal syllabic use and great imagery.
Teresa
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Yes, I know what you mean about feeling minuscule at the ocean.
Good minimal syllabic use and great imagery.
Teresa
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Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :)
Gypsy hugs