Perennials of War
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, great stuff. We get fed a little more every time we read on. So is it really worth to pursue those pictures? I certainly hope so. Looking forward to reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Hi Barbara, great stuff. We get fed a little more every time we read on. So is it really worth to pursue those pictures? I certainly hope so. Looking forward to reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Gang members with violent tats. If I were SHana, I'd forget about the painting. It's just a thing... not worth injury or worse. Sometimes you have to prioritize. People tend not to think about what really matters, tho.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Gang members with violent tats. If I were SHana, I'd forget about the painting. It's just a thing... not worth injury or worse. Sometimes you have to prioritize. People tend not to think about what really matters, tho.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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No they don't. Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Barbara,
Well a little bit more information on the Russian symbols and tattoos.
He glanced at her. "The next time you decided to go sightseeing - decide.
Could that tell us which mafia group they belong too?" - belong to.
All the best
G
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Hi Barbara,
Well a little bit more information on the Russian symbols and tattoos.
He glanced at her. "The next time you decided to go sightseeing - decide.
Could that tell us which mafia group they belong too?" - belong to.
All the best
G
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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I hate it when I make those stupid errors and don't catch them. Most my first graders know that. Anyway, I appreciate the catches and have made the corrections.
Comment from c_lucas
This is a very good setup chapter with very good insight into the character, Jeff. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read. Your post has good imagery.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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This is a very good setup chapter with very good insight into the character, Jeff. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read. Your post has good imagery.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sasha
Excellent work with this chapter. The story is moving along at a good, strong pace. I have one comment, since I do no speak German, I get confused over the German numbering of your chapters. Is their any way you could put them in English (maybe in parenthesis?)
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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Excellent work with this chapter. The story is moving along at a good, strong pace. I have one comment, since I do no speak German, I get confused over the German numbering of your chapters. Is their any way you could put them in English (maybe in parenthesis?)
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Not were I have them, and I can't use numbers anymore, I get accused of duplicating my titles. I try to have it in the post. I think I forgot this time. I will add them. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Poor Shana. I think there is much more than they are telling her. I wonder what her other question is. You have given the reader a great deal to think about. I look forward to reading more,
~patty~
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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Poor Shana. I think there is much more than they are telling her. I wonder what her other question is. You have given the reader a great deal to think about. I look forward to reading more,
~patty~
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.