Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Hot stuff"Words to pass on to my children
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written story poem about the disco era, which most of us can still remember. Our parents did not always approve what we think are just fun, they could see the bigger picture that we could not see.
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A very well-written story poem about the disco era, which most of us can still remember. Our parents did not always approve what we think are just fun, they could see the bigger picture that we could not see.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
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Thanks Sandra for your excellent review on my poem, much appreciated, Mary
Comment from Kerry Foley
That was terrific, lol I loved it. Omg, how I loved Donna summers
back then. What a trip to the past my friend.
This is an outstanding contest entry.
Good luck. ~Kerry~
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That was terrific, lol I loved it. Omg, how I loved Donna summers
back then. What a trip to the past my friend.
This is an outstanding contest entry.
Good luck. ~Kerry~
Comment Written 14-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
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Thanks Kerry for your excellent review on my poem, I am so pelease you think it is terrific. LOL Mary
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Your welcome Mary
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Boy, does this bring back memories ... Well written and very descriptive of what it was like. I like the floor being a free-for-all. Nicely written. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
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Boy, does this bring back memories ... Well written and very descriptive of what it was like. I like the floor being a free-for-all. Nicely written. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2017
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Thanks Debbie, Yes it was great when you felt like dancing you could do your own thing, I loved to dance. Mary
Comment from sue133
I loved your poem. Took me right back to those times as a teenager when one did all the things you describe. Your descriptions of those times are so real. I particularly liked, 'using an iron to press our hair straight' as I have frizzy hair (still) and probably damaged it horribly when ironing it. And it was all about meeting a 'boy'. Well done on this enactment of a time gone by. Susan
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I loved your poem. Took me right back to those times as a teenager when one did all the things you describe. Your descriptions of those times are so real. I particularly liked, 'using an iron to press our hair straight' as I have frizzy hair (still) and probably damaged it horribly when ironing it. And it was all about meeting a 'boy'. Well done on this enactment of a time gone by. Susan
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
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Hi Sue
I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem about the past scene. My sister used to Iron her hair every day. Yes great memories.
Mary