Luna's Form Poetry
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Comment from Poetic Friend
This is really good, Luna. With minimal words and butterfly's metamorphosis , you clarified and explained change so well. It is a personal metamorphosis, evolving transition. Change is a part of life, and we must always be prepare to adapt like the butterfly.
Personally, I love butterflies, and recently wrote a poem about butterflies. If you wish to read it, the poem is in my portfolio under the title "Colorful and Purposeful"
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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This is really good, Luna. With minimal words and butterfly's metamorphosis , you clarified and explained change so well. It is a personal metamorphosis, evolving transition. Change is a part of life, and we must always be prepare to adapt like the butterfly.
Personally, I love butterflies, and recently wrote a poem about butterflies. If you wish to read it, the poem is in my portfolio under the title "Colorful and Purposeful"
Comment Written 26-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Poetic Friend. I appreciate your thoughts on this poem and your support of my writing.
Comment from Dean Kuch
I've read a few of poems written in the Clarity Poem format before, Jeni, but this is one of the better presented and conveyed pieces.
We all must go through change and transitions in life, whether we want to or not.
It's all part of gaining wisdom and living a more fulfilled and enriched existence.
Well done, my talentedfiend friend.
Wherever did you find that fancy font?
Heh-heh-heh...
~Dean ;)
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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I've read a few of poems written in the Clarity Poem format before, Jeni, but this is one of the better presented and conveyed pieces.
We all must go through change and transitions in life, whether we want to or not.
It's all part of gaining wisdom and living a more fulfilled and enriched existence.
Well done, my talented
Wherever did you find that fancy font?
Heh-heh-heh...
~Dean ;)
Comment Written 26-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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hehe my foot. You're the best fiend a gal could have. Thanks for the kind review on m;y clarity pyramid. It's definitely not my favorite form, but for the project at hand (of which you are well aware) it just kind of fit.
There was a time on FanStory many years ago when all ANYONE was doing was posting Clarity Pyramids. I soured on them and haven't posted one again until today. And probably my last for another many years.
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It is always my pleasure, Jeni. I do feel that this one is very good.
Alas, I too am out of sixes for the week.
**SIGH**
~Dean :(
Comment from Bill Schott
This clarity pyramid, Change, uses all words relating to seeking another approach at life. The personal aspect is the key that you show here. Many things we can't effect change in; we can evolve though. Good point.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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This clarity pyramid, Change, uses all words relating to seeking another approach at life. The personal aspect is the key that you show here. Many things we can't effect change in; we can evolve though. Good point.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Bill, for realizing the connotation of the word "evolve." That was awesome. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Clarity Pyramid poem. Our lives change daily, sometime visible other times not visible. We can just accept change and grow instead of sulk about it and stay where and what we are.
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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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A very well-written Clarity Pyramid poem. Our lives change daily, sometime visible other times not visible. We can just accept change and grow instead of sulk about it and stay where and what we are.
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Comment Written 26-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Sandra. I appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts with me about this poem. As always, I appreciate your attention to my writing efforts.
Comment from robyn corum
Okay -
THIS is a totally white screen. Did you know you can always post your pieces under the 'preview' option first? I always do that to avoid these issues. Want to check on this one, too?
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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Okay -
THIS is a totally white screen. Did you know you can always post your pieces under the 'preview' option first? I always do that to avoid these issues. Want to check on this one, too?
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Comment Written 26-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Sorry, there was a computer error (never blame it on the humans, eh?) It should be okay now. Thanks, RC.
