Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

It is hard to have so much alliteration without developing a tongue twister but you did a good with it. Nice imagery :)

Teresa

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017

Thanks! I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem and thank you for the kind review.

love and light,

jeni

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting type of poetry you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and I like the format and imagery very much! Great job! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017

Thanks! I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem. I appreciate your review.

love and light,

jeni

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hmmm, yet another interesting and intriguing poetic form I'd never heard of before now, Jeni. This complex alliterisen form is an alliteration lover's wet dream...if you'll please pardon the expression.
Not only is it highly alliterative, it rhymes as well.
Is that a requirement, or is rhyming optional?
Just curious.
Nicely done...
~Dean

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017

In the complex alliterisen, there's no rhymes. I didn't make any rhymes on purpose! The
Rhyming Alliterisen does indeed include rhyme.]

Thanks much, Dean *smile*

jeni

reply by Dean Kuch on 20-Jan-2017

Well, fairies kinda rhymes with bunnies and pixies (the "ies" sounds), aglow rhymes with pogo...
So, yeah, it does kinda rhyme, that's why I asked.

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017

I see where you mean!

Comment from loismddavis

Excellent

you certainly have fulfilled the requirements for this poem. Lots of alliteration. I never see the reason for going to all this trouble for something that turns out not to be poetic al all-but you fulfilled the requirements

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017

Thanks! I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem. I appreciate your review.

love and light,

jeni

Comment from winnona

Excellent

A very well-written poem. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Very well done. Your poems always paint such beautiful imagery for the reader.

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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017

Thank you, winnona. I'm glad you enjoyed it and appreciate your gracious words.

love,

jeni

Comment from F. Wehr3

Excellent

I thought this was extremely good. I am a fan of fantasy and alliteration is one of my favorite poetic devices. Sorry no sixes left this week. This deserved it.

Take care,
Russell

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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017

Thanks! I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem. I appreciate your review.

love and light,

jeni