Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "The Distance to a Dream"a place to gather my poetic forms
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Comment from Jackarrie
Hi Jeni,
I really love your dreamlike poem, I know you are thinking of your lovely son Michael who is in a different world now. We can create any kind of world we want by just visualizing and also dreaming.
Lovely artwork, I like the shape of the text.
Well written
Mary
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Hi Jeni,
I really love your dreamlike poem, I know you are thinking of your lovely son Michael who is in a different world now. We can create any kind of world we want by just visualizing and also dreaming.
Lovely artwork, I like the shape of the text.
Well written
Mary
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Thanks, Mary. I appreciate your reference to my son, and am happy that you enjoyed this poem.
love,
jeni
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is lovely, Jeni. You did a great job with the construction as it is not easy to write a mirror image Etheree, but the end line of the first marries beautifully as the beginning of the second. I lobe the message as it is both uplifting and inspiring. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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This is lovely, Jeni. You did a great job with the construction as it is not easy to write a mirror image Etheree, but the end line of the first marries beautifully as the beginning of the second. I lobe the message as it is both uplifting and inspiring. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Thanks so very much! I'm always happy when you review and enjoy one of my poems. I appreciate your attention to my portfolio!
love,
jeni
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It is my pleasure and a genuine blessing to read your work.
Comment from Sis Cat
Luna, a phenomenal poem about dreams and the power of the imagination. I enjoyed your enchanting imagery from myth and fantasy:
"Hobbits and centaurs
dancing 'round a tree in the meadow;
these enchanting creatures want you to join
them. Beasts of the forest come out at night
Frolicking under the shining moon"
Yes, all you need are "childlike faith and belief" to enter this realm. One can make dreams come true when one "follow your heart the distance."
Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Luna, a phenomenal poem about dreams and the power of the imagination. I enjoyed your enchanting imagery from myth and fantasy:
"Hobbits and centaurs
dancing 'round a tree in the meadow;
these enchanting creatures want you to join
them. Beasts of the forest come out at night
Frolicking under the shining moon"
Yes, all you need are "childlike faith and belief" to enter this realm. One can make dreams come true when one "follow your heart the distance."
Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Thanks! I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem, Sis Cat. I appreciate your gracious review.
love and light,
jeni
