Comment from zell0152

Excellent

This heightens the senses and creates a fictitious, but real, world, where anything is possible. It makes me want to fly and explore and dream, have conversations with the sun and the moon, and be in a world where clouds are woven into magical pillows and beds. Of course, all good things come to an end though, and your conclusion grounds me. I would not understand what it means to you, but it makes me think, what will I feel later on when none of my dreams have come true? Thanks for the poem!

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017

Thanks!

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

You know Luna this a beautiful written I just find envelope rhyme a hard rhyme to read rhythmically that's all. Nonetheless some wonderful metaphors in this piece

dip

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017

Thanks for the review, dip. Sorry the envelope rhyme was hard for you to read; I don't usually use it but thought I'd give it a try once. Enjoy your day!

Yours,

jeni

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written dream poem. Our dreams usually go beyond our conscience mind. It is always interesting to see what our dreams unveil in our uncobscience mind.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017

Thank you, Sandra. I'm always happy to have your reviews. I appreciate your attention to my work.

luna

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

Excellent Poem! The author's words are interesting, creative and thought provoking.
The reader pondered on the words of this poem. The artwork is exceptional
and compliments this poem well.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017

Dear harmony13

Thanks so much! I'm happy you enjoyed this.

luna

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Luna - this is a really lovely poem. A dream jaunt that I really enjoyed. Your quatrains are in perfect form - mixed abba and abab, whch works well. A fantasy poem that I found very inspiring and admired it very much. Very well displayed - . Warm regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017

Dear Dorothy,

You alerted me to an error in my poem, the stanzas were to be all in the abba form. Thanks to you, I've made the fix and I think it sounds okay.

luna

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

You have a strong rhythm and a light feel and flow to your words. "Maids spinning wheels of poetry" is a wonderful line. I can see the words being created. Excellent poetic form and imagery in your words.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017

Thanks so much, mermaids. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this one as well. Have a good day (if you can, in that cold!)

luna

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This is a magical journey filled with mesmerizing imagery and flawless rhyme. The meter is splendid as there was only one place where I tripped a little when reading aloud. It was the "and frivolity" but I understand the "and" being there as it equalized the syllable count in the line. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017

Thanks, Mystic Angel 7777,

I'm happy that you enjoyed this one. I'm going to go in and take a look at that part to see if I can revise it so its flow is a bit better. Thanks again for your support.

reply by Mystic Angel 7777 on 10-Jan-2017

My pleasure.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This set of quatrains, Dream Jaunt, gives away the secret source of poetic content. A good night's sleep a lift from the DM. Good to know.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017

Thanks Bill,

Yep, another lift from the DM. He hadn't been around in awhile and gave me a nudge. I appreciate your review and support.

Luna

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Wow what symbolism and comparisons you used were absolutely wonderful. Illuminated tapestry, buoyant threads, Dream Master, Absolutely wonderful

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017

Thank you, Barb, I appreciate your kind review! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my work today.

luna

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Excellent. I like the background and letter coloring with your poetry. The poem is well written and the color scheme adds to the overall effect. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017

Thanks so much. I am so happy that you enjoyed this. Thanks for your support of my work as well.