Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Dreamy"a place to gather my poetic forms
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Comment from jusylee72
Great job on a hard format I have yet to try. You really know what you are doing. Your message keeps moving too, though not falling as you say in the third stanza
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Great job on a hard format I have yet to try. You really know what you are doing. Your message keeps moving too, though not falling as you say in the third stanza
Comment Written 12-Dec-2016
Comment from DR DIP
Really nice write Luna I love the night sky and especially on a full moon
breathe peace deep inside your stillness..I love this line
dip
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Really nice write Luna I love the night sky and especially on a full moon
breathe peace deep inside your stillness..I love this line
dip
Comment Written 12-Dec-2016
Comment from Mastery
celestial beings all
around you ~
this is true love's heavenly lair
don't worry, you won't fall ~
there are two
angels by your side over there"
This is professional poetry that cannot even be found in Hallmark cards, but rather in great poetry volumes. Bravo, Jeni! Happy Holidays, my friend. Bob
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2016
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celestial beings all
around you ~
this is true love's heavenly lair
don't worry, you won't fall ~
there are two
angels by your side over there"
This is professional poetry that cannot even be found in Hallmark cards, but rather in great poetry volumes. Bravo, Jeni! Happy Holidays, my friend. Bob
Comment Written 12-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2016
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My dear friend Bob, I'm so grateful for this amazing six star review.
I'm always pleased when you approve of my work ; your opinion is important to me.
Thanks once again. I'm truly grateful.
Jeni ❤️❤️❤️
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You are a wonderful writer, Jeni. I wish I could give you sixes more often, but as you know we have to spread the wealth so to speak. :) Bob
Comment from Teri7
This is a very pretty dreamy type poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed it very much! Blessings, Teri
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This is a very pretty dreamy type poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed it very much! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-Dec-2016
Comment from rjuselius
this is a beautiful piece of poetry with an interesting format dear jeni! i've never heard of a tri-fall but you seem to fit the requirements. and beyond. i love the heavenly theme.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
Rebekka x
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this is a beautiful piece of poetry with an interesting format dear jeni! i've never heard of a tri-fall but you seem to fit the requirements. and beyond. i love the heavenly theme.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 12-Dec-2016
Comment from winnona
A well-written poem. your words flow line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Your artwork completed it all. well done.
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A well-written poem. your words flow line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Your artwork completed it all. well done.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2016
Comment from Janet Foor
A new poetic form to me. Very creative in rhyme scheme and meter.
Lovely artwork and imagery in this tri-fall poem.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
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A new poetic form to me. Very creative in rhyme scheme and meter.
Lovely artwork and imagery in this tri-fall poem.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 12-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
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Thanks, Janet. Glad you liked it.
Comment from WriteSins!
I love how experimental you are with your styles of poetry, it is something I admire. Anyways, the poem itself is very well written and crisp. It gave off a very soothing vibe, and honestly lately that's something I've been needing. Excellent work and best of wishes!
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I love how experimental you are with your styles of poetry, it is something I admire. Anyways, the poem itself is very well written and crisp. It gave off a very soothing vibe, and honestly lately that's something I've been needing. Excellent work and best of wishes!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2016
Comment from Irish Rain
So pretty, yes, I believe we all have angels, to guide and protect, and the world is fairly feathered with them. I loved this, very beautiful, blessings...
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
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So pretty, yes, I believe we all have angels, to guide and protect, and the world is fairly feathered with them. I loved this, very beautiful, blessings...
Comment Written 12-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
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Thank you for the gracious review you gave my poem.
Comment from Dean Kuch
This is a lovely poem, Luna, and a very intriguing form.
I am going to copy your example to see if I can possibly create a Tri-Fall of my own.
I like how you've alluded to the fact that we are all perpetually watched over and protected by angels, even during our darkest hour.
No...please allow me to rephrase that...Especially during our darkest hour.
It's nice to know that someone, or thing, is always close by to catch us should we fall.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
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This is a lovely poem, Luna, and a very intriguing form.
I am going to copy your example to see if I can possibly create a Tri-Fall of my own.
I like how you've alluded to the fact that we are all perpetually watched over and protected by angels, even during our darkest hour.
No...please allow me to rephrase that...Especially during our darkest hour.
It's nice to know that someone, or thing, is always close by to catch us should we fall.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
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So far in my life, anyway, I've been caught when I've fallen. Glad you liked this.
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Not me.
I've been allowed to fall, and more than once.
You're welcome, Jeni.
~Dean
