Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Undead"a place to gather my poetic forms
37 total reviews
Comment from mbroyles2
Got that right.
I would freak if I saw something like that coming for me.
My adventure with the undead would not make a great movie.
I think you have an excellent contest entry here.
Michael
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
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Got that right.
I would freak if I saw something like that coming for me.
My adventure with the undead would not make a great movie.
I think you have an excellent contest entry here.
Michael
Comment Written 12-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
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Thanks, Michael. Your comical review is much appreciated.
Comment from Ella25
Interesting way of using words. Still trying to understand how Quinzaine poetry works to make it work and sense. My best shot and thank you for sharing. Blessings to you Luna. Ella
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Interesting way of using words. Still trying to understand how Quinzaine poetry works to make it work and sense. My best shot and thank you for sharing. Blessings to you Luna. Ella
Comment Written 12-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
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Thank you for your very kind review. ❤️ ❤️
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You are welcome, Luna. It was my pleasure. Ella
Comment from RodG
I must be one of the few people living these days who isn't a zombie fan. Nevertheless, I liked this Quinzaine for its tongue-in-cheek tone. Hope the answer was "Yes!"
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
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I must be one of the few people living these days who isn't a zombie fan. Nevertheless, I liked this Quinzaine for its tongue-in-cheek tone. Hope the answer was "Yes!"
Comment Written 12-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
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ROD, YOU KNOW IT WAS!
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent entry in this quinzain poetry contest, the unique wording in this entry makes it different and mind catching, I like the artwork, it's infinitely better than the normal horrib imagery, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
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This is an excellent entry in this quinzain poetry contest, the unique wording in this entry makes it different and mind catching, I like the artwork, it's infinitely better than the normal horrib imagery, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 12-Dec-2016
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good Quinzaine poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Teri
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This is a very good Quinzaine poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-Dec-2016
Comment from humpwhistle
Well, I guess running would be a useful attribute
when confronted by the living dead.
I'm guessing that would be the first order of business.
Best of luck . . . in the contest, too.
Peace, Lee
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Well, I guess running would be a useful attribute
when confronted by the living dead.
I'm guessing that would be the first order of business.
Best of luck . . . in the contest, too.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 12-Dec-2016
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh my gosh, Luna, that was so hilarious!!
I'm pretty sure you said everything you needed to say in your brief poem.
Zombies? Run!
See, no need for long chapters like mine, just get right to the point! haha. Love it,
Rhonda
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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
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Oh my gosh, Luna, that was so hilarious!!
I'm pretty sure you said everything you needed to say in your brief poem.
Zombies? Run!
See, no need for long chapters like mine, just get right to the point! haha. Love it,
Rhonda
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Comment Written 12-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
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Thanks so much, Rhonda. I appreciate your kind review!
