Comment from Margaret Ford

Excellent

I've never been motivated to write a palindrome. So my hat is off to you, Jeni, as you are obviously made of sturdier stuff than I. Truly. I'm impressed. Its a good poem and, as far as I can see, you've reversed the words perfectly. Good grief, woman, it hurts my brain just to think of writing one of these! No way! Margaret

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review of my poem. I do appreciate it!

luna

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Looks lovely to me, but I've only ever written one. I really enjoyed it, like a puzzle to be solved. This is charming, blessings...

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review of my poem. I do appreciate it!

luna

Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

Luna,

The art is very unusual...I like it. I have never seen this style before but I think you have done it correctly. Your feelings are expressed well. The themes are well chosen. The flow is smooth.

There are no problems or typos.

Well chosen words, colorful arrangement and wonderfully decorated thoughts.
Your feelings are very understandable and expressed through the poem.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Thank you for your kind and thorough review, Oatmeal. I always enjoy it when you stop by.

Comment from jyshaffer

Exceptional

amazing. I had to trace the words backwards and forwards out of curiosity to get the full effect of the mirror image. I felt like you were juggling words in the air and catching every single one, then tossing it back into the air.

Keep posting!

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2016

Dear jyshaffer,

I need to apologize first for the tardiness of this reply.

I am amazed at this gorgeous six-star review! I'm happy that you traced the words and found no errors, just a nice read.

Once again, THANK YOU for the gracious exceptional review.

Comment from Yvon

Excellent

I enjoyed this poem. It had the reflective format I think you desired to portray. Visions of the night sky became alive as too the underground realms. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review of my poem. I do appreciate it! Thanks for reading my stuff!

luna

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

I think you got it right. I have only written one palindrome in my entire life myself, but I think they are a lot of fun.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review of my poem. I thought it was fun, Maria! I do appreciate it! Thanks for reading my stuff!

luna

Comment from Writer51

Excellent

Very nice, Luna. It uses children to describe the simplicity of how freely their minds really live. You also describe how fantasy can wonder endlessly.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review of my poem, Writer51. I do appreciate it! Thanks for reading my stuff!

luna

Comment from mkflood

Excellent

pretty cool luna. so are you part of the fairies in your story?..wink. just teasing. I want to thank you for selecting my work. its an honor to have my work included with yours. creative poem and great job overall..thanks again.. mkflood

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

thanks so much. I am remiss in that I didn't thank you in my author's notes. I'll change that quickly. Thanks for creating such a special picture for me!

luna

reply by mkflood on 06-Dec-2016

np..there is about 800 available to ya..thanks again..wink

Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

I'm not much help, I'm afraid. These always feel impossible to me. I can only tell you it seemed right, and I enjoyed the theme and the words and the musical flow. It is a happy and pleasant poem whatever it is called.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review of my poem. I do appreciate it! Thanks for reading my stuff!

luna

Comment from ~Dovey

Excellent

Hi Luna:

Yes, in essence you have the palindrome as described. These are so difficult to write and have something that actually makes sense. You've done well with this task.

Good job!

Kim

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review of my poem. I do appreciate it! Thanks for reading my stuff!

luna