Perennials of War
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, this is intriguing, and quite an unusual set up. I like how he's got a penthouse in the middle of New York with garden and everything. I know they do exist. And he is protecting her. Well, at least so far. Looking forward to what's next. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016
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Hi Barbara, this is intriguing, and quite an unusual set up. I like how he's got a penthouse in the middle of New York with garden and everything. I know they do exist. And he is protecting her. Well, at least so far. Looking forward to what's next. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 27-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the generous review.
Comment from royowen
The three men that had been tracking Shana, had traced her to Anderson's place were she is being held for her safety, when the three men in dark suits, from the Russian embassy ask him, questioning about driving a black Jag, saying he picked up Shana, and that she has something that belongs to them! But he talks to Philip who says he was driving a Bentley on that day. They are ushered out, and he manages to avert disaster for the moment, excellent scribing Barbara, blessings, Roy
Typo : I was pulling (a) weeds from the garden.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016
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The three men that had been tracking Shana, had traced her to Anderson's place were she is being held for her safety, when the three men in dark suits, from the Russian embassy ask him, questioning about driving a black Jag, saying he picked up Shana, and that she has something that belongs to them! But he talks to Philip who says he was driving a Bentley on that day. They are ushered out, and he manages to avert disaster for the moment, excellent scribing Barbara, blessings, Roy
Typo : I was pulling (a) weeds from the garden.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016
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That typo will be taken care of. Thank you for the catch.
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Most welcome Barbara,
Comment from c_lucas
One way to surpass the truth without lying. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. You did good maintaining the tension.
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One way to surpass the truth without lying. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. You did good maintaining the tension.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from barkingdog
I enjoyed seeing Anderson's posh penthouse with garden, housekeeper, butler and dogs. Quite a private and safe place for Shana to hide while he gets some perspective.
He now knows that the Russians are interested in something Shana has.
Your meal sounds delicious and besides Romeo's kiss, added to the realism of the scene. Even the rich and powerful eat.
:) e
-"I know I'm addressing congress(Congress) Monday morning
-"Yes. I stayed with them until they left the building and[ I] made sure I locked the elevator." OR building(,) and I made
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I enjoyed seeing Anderson's posh penthouse with garden, housekeeper, butler and dogs. Quite a private and safe place for Shana to hide while he gets some perspective.
He now knows that the Russians are interested in something Shana has.
Your meal sounds delicious and besides Romeo's kiss, added to the realism of the scene. Even the rich and powerful eat.
:) e
-"I know I'm addressing congress(Congress) Monday morning
-"Yes. I stayed with them until they left the building and[ I] made sure I locked the elevator." OR building(,) and I made
Comment Written 27-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016
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I have made the corrections. Thank you for the encouragement and help.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, it appears to me that the action in this story hasn't stopped for long, and is most likely soon to reach a feverish pitch before it slows down. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter. :-)
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Well, it appears to me that the action in this story hasn't stopped for long, and is most likely soon to reach a feverish pitch before it slows down. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter. :-)
Comment Written 27-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from Sasha
I like this story. It is fascinating and has plenty of intrigue too. I didn't get the impression Shana was hiding anything, but you never know. I am sure Philip will get to the bottom of this. Nice work building up the tension. I look forward to the next post.
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016
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I like this story. It is fascinating and has plenty of intrigue too. I didn't get the impression Shana was hiding anything, but you never know. I am sure Philip will get to the bottom of this. Nice work building up the tension. I look forward to the next post.
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
If I was in trouble I'd like him to come to my aid, and where can I get dogs like those three?? I'd like Romeo, lol. Now, we know that Shana hasn't got anything belonging to them, at least not that she or we know of. I am loving this story. I look forward to the next part. :) Sandra xx
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If I was in trouble I'd like him to come to my aid, and where can I get dogs like those three?? I'd like Romeo, lol. Now, we know that Shana hasn't got anything belonging to them, at least not that she or we know of. I am loving this story. I look forward to the next part. :) Sandra xx
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from Ben Colder
I like the way the house keeper picked up Shanna's religion. Very clever. Another good story. I will try and keep up. Best to you.
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I like the way the house keeper picked up Shanna's religion. Very clever. Another good story. I will try and keep up. Best to you.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the kind review and support.