Luna's Form Poetry
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Comment from royowen
A well written and cleverly manicured swap poem, that is skilfully and deftly crafted to fit the strict swap format, beautifully worded a smoothly metered with the aabb rhyming to round off a very good entry in this love poem contest, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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A well written and cleverly manicured swap poem, that is skilfully and deftly crafted to fit the strict swap format, beautifully worded a smoothly metered with the aabb rhyming to round off a very good entry in this love poem contest, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 26-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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Thanks for the extremely kind review and the good luck wishes. They mean a lot to me.
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Most welcome
Comment from Writer51
Very nice. I always like writings where cupid is included. It has such as soft effect on the mood. Thanks for sharing. It's a great poem.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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Very nice. I always like writings where cupid is included. It has such as soft effect on the mood. Thanks for sharing. It's a great poem.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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Thank you, my friend. I'm thrilled to have your approval. ❤️❤️🎶❤️❤️
Comment from Dean Kuch
A lovely love poem, Jeni, and a very well composed Swap Quatrain indeed.
I'm sure Mickey is very proud of his mom for thinking and writing of him as often as you do.
And, if you don't believe he can see and read everything you do to honor his memory while he is where he is, think again...
Best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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A lovely love poem, Jeni, and a very well composed Swap Quatrain indeed.
I'm sure Mickey is very proud of his mom for thinking and writing of him as often as you do.
And, if you don't believe he can see and read everything you do to honor his memory while he is where he is, think again...
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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Thank you, my friend. I'm thankful for your reassurance that he is still watching me, though he shows me in tangible ways often!
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It was a pleasure as always, Luna.
You're very welcome.
~Dean :}
Comment from jyshaffer
Oh, this was so clever. I have never read a quatrain before. You manipulated the words so well. I like how it was succinct but chock-full-of-content.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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Oh, this was so clever. I have never read a quatrain before. You manipulated the words so well. I like how it was succinct but chock-full-of-content.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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I'm humbled and honored by the six star review you have placed on this poem. Thank you for the compliment on the words and content.
You made my day ❤️❤️❤️
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written love poem. Cupid is synonym with love, you brought him subtle into the poem to show his role in the love process.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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A very well-written love poem. Cupid is synonym with love, you brought him subtle into the poem to show his role in the love process.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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Sandra, I thank you for your kind words and review. ❤️❤️
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written my friend showing again how talented you are you adapt to poetry forms very well I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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Yes this is well written my friend showing again how talented you are you adapt to poetry forms very well I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 26-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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Thanks, Jill, for the complimentary review. I'm so glad you enjoyed this ❤️
Comment from Heather Knight
What an original form! I love it.
I have enjoyed reading your poem and also the author's notes. I might try one like this, but it does sound difficult.
Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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What an original form! I love it.
I have enjoyed reading your poem and also the author's notes. I might try one like this, but it does sound difficult.
Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 26-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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You could do it, Maria... I'm definitely keep an eye out for you. Thanks for this kind review! ❤️❤️❤️
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I've just written one. I'll post it tomorrow, as today I have already posted two pieces.
Comment from mbroyles2
Excellent entry to the contest.
I like the rhymes and really good imagery.
The transition between stanzas was flawless.
Michael
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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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Excellent entry to the contest.
I like the rhymes and really good imagery.
The transition between stanzas was flawless.
Michael
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Comment Written 26-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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Hey Michael, thanks for the kind words and the good luck wishes as well!
