Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Writer,

This was. Fun and witty poem to find early in the morning! The first and third lines were my favorites-- very, very clever! Good luck!

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016

Thank you for appreciating the humor.

Comment from Steven Latty

Excellent

Good poem, it flows well and rhymes well. A random poem about slugs. Keep up the creativity thanks for sharing. You may benefit from a picture on the next one.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016

Thank you for seeing the fun in this poem.

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Funny. They should be easy to track. They leave a slime trail.
A slug was mugged by a turtle. He said, "It all happened so fast."

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016

I think you joined in the fun.

Comment from gene roush

Excellent

Very cute.
I love quatrains. They roll of the tongue and excellent for simple phrases that elicit smiles.
Thanks for sharing
Gene

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016

Thank you for the complimentary review.

Comment from janalma

Excellent

This one made me grin. I don't know anything about quatrains, so can't give an educated review, but I liked this. It's so...realistic. I can see it happening to me. Lol.

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 Comment Written 27-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016

Thank you, you made me smile.