To Last Forever
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Truth or Bare"Poems by Michael
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Comment from robina1978
Excellent picture that complements your poem perfectly. By your reviews you must have touched a dodgy subject. But in my eyes you wrote this very well. I liked how you went from manslaughter to suicide. The six is to compensate for the low review.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Excellent picture that complements your poem perfectly. By your reviews you must have touched a dodgy subject. But in my eyes you wrote this very well. I liked how you went from manslaughter to suicide. The six is to compensate for the low review.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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why thank you Sister...-smile-....yes yes, very "dodgy" indeed. boarder line stalking if you ask me. Thank you Beautiful for the rescue. love to you...Michael.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, michael, you did an excellent job with the imagery of this one, someone seeking redemption for an act committed, but not finding the redemption they seek, withers away in loneliness. i enjoyed reading it
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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this is an excellent write, michael, you did an excellent job with the imagery of this one, someone seeking redemption for an act committed, but not finding the redemption they seek, withers away in loneliness. i enjoyed reading it
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Comment Written 03-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Hi Sweets...-smile-....ah thanks. Some people are just so damn evil they got no hope. How are you...? holding up okay I hope. love to you...Michael
Comment from Nika2016
This is so sick...come into my town and the locals will be all over you..We dont murder people here. Who is the whore?Who is the real Devil? For those who would question my veracity..see the word Harry where he threatens her..then look at his last note to me in IAm in Me poem. He calls me Harry . No one dared you to do anything. No one is acting like whore. Doubling up on cop watch tonight...They will get your words.
One star because I could not give zero...Try to explain away this one as old Bruce....
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This is so sick...come into my town and the locals will be all over you..We dont murder people here. Who is the whore?Who is the real Devil? For those who would question my veracity..see the word Harry where he threatens her..then look at his last note to me in IAm in Me poem. He calls me Harry . No one dared you to do anything. No one is acting like whore. Doubling up on cop watch tonight...They will get your words.
One star because I could not give zero...Try to explain away this one as old Bruce....
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Comment Written 03-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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hm....my goodness must be overwhelming to you also...to ah "produce" such emotive energy. I know I know...it was the most difficult thing i ever did. to wait and see, if Truth were true. and in truth ...I knew He would.
ah Nika Jimi...whoever you are. I dont even think about you...-smile-
until you show up talking like...well like you do. I really wish you'd consider professional care. all the best-
