To Last Forever
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Exotic "Poems by Michael
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Comment from misscookie
You captured my attention from the3 start
Your word had me in another world until I heard the music everything was magical.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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You captured my attention from the3 start
Your word had me in another world until I heard the music everything was magical.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 24-Jun-2016
Comment from tfawcus
Marvellous imagery and ambiguous wording to promote thought. You have certainly captured the sensuous nature of the tango in this poem. Much enjoyed.
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Marvellous imagery and ambiguous wording to promote thought. You have certainly captured the sensuous nature of the tango in this poem. Much enjoyed.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2016
Comment from arnie47
Imagery spot on. The words, the mood all set up for a very romantic and pulse inducing evening. Nothing better than being with the one you love and having these feelings emitted.
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Imagery spot on. The words, the mood all set up for a very romantic and pulse inducing evening. Nothing better than being with the one you love and having these feelings emitted.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2016
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written romantic poem. The mood is set for an idyllic evening with someone you adores. It seems there is going to be a great feast of romance tonight.
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A very well-written romantic poem. The mood is set for an idyllic evening with someone you adores. It seems there is going to be a great feast of romance tonight.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2016
Comment from William Ross
very nice on exotic to dance the night away with the one you love, good job on the free verse Thanks for sharing the thoughts on this
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very nice on exotic to dance the night away with the one you love, good job on the free verse Thanks for sharing the thoughts on this
Comment Written 24-Jun-2016
Comment from Domino 2
Brilliant use of poetic vocabulary, Michael.
Maybe needs possessive, [tango's], as I read it as one complete word to start.
Many original and stunning metaphors.
Stunning imagery, especially when stretching the mind to imagine.
I won't pretend I understood much of your though-provoking write, but I don't care at all, as I was gripped all the way through.
Best wishes, Ray.
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Brilliant use of poetic vocabulary, Michael.
Maybe needs possessive, [tango's], as I read it as one complete word to start.
Many original and stunning metaphors.
Stunning imagery, especially when stretching the mind to imagine.
I won't pretend I understood much of your though-provoking write, but I don't care at all, as I was gripped all the way through.
Best wishes, Ray.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2016
Comment from robina1978
An excellent photo/video that complements your poem perfectly. As always it is a free verse with lots of alliteration. At night the love starts, persuasive and temptation, put in a tango.
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An excellent photo/video that complements your poem perfectly. As always it is a free verse with lots of alliteration. At night the love starts, persuasive and temptation, put in a tango.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2016
Comment from Zue65
The animated and passionate tango dance complemented well the heat and passion infused in your poem. The titillating scene says it all and intensifies the message you intended for the readers. The author employed appropriate visual images to dramatize his point. Good job.
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The animated and passionate tango dance complemented well the heat and passion infused in your poem. The titillating scene says it all and intensifies the message you intended for the readers. The author employed appropriate visual images to dramatize his point. Good job.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2016
Comment from rjuselius
this indeed is a passionate piece of poetry dear michael! i wish you had entered the black and white contest with this. a rather strong contender. i love the subtle metaphors and the wording. nice one my freind!
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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this indeed is a passionate piece of poetry dear michael! i wish you had entered the black and white contest with this. a rather strong contender. i love the subtle metaphors and the wording. nice one my freind!
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 24-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Hi Reb.....-smile-...man I'm telling ya...I gotta start being more careful...they arrested me in cleaveland ya know...yea threw the book at me...everything from looking too good after midnight to inciting a riot ....i'm used to roses and underpants...but them hardcovers leave a mark...ouch......anyway...i'll sign anything you want...just dont get me in trouble....ahaha....love michael
Comment from LIJ Red
The mystical is akin to an inside joke. Grammar sufficient and images
abounding, but, like Casca, "for mine own part, it was Greek to me."
Viva that different drum.
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The mystical is akin to an inside joke. Grammar sufficient and images
abounding, but, like Casca, "for mine own part, it was Greek to me."
Viva that different drum.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2016
