Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your Spring palindrome. You paint a lovely picture in your spring time canvas. A joyful, playful time as everything comes back to life. Well done.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

Hi, Janet.
Thank you for your lovely review and kind words. Mean so much on this Saturday morning :)

Senyai

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

The moment of air circulates in its own way. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery.

 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

Thank you, c_lucas. I appreciate your kind words and thoughts on my work.

Have a great weekend,
Senyai

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Excellent spring time palindrome poem on the prompt, great job works out fantastic, should do well, good luck on this and have a great day

 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

Thank you so much for your kind words and thoughts, William.

Have a great weekend,
Senyai

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

The sun is finally here and I hope it stays lol. This poem mentions everything that I associate with Spring and Summer. I wish I had some sixes left for this delightful poem. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

Thank you, dmt1967. Your review and kind thoughts mean a lot to me.

Have a great weekend,
Senyai

Comment from WalkerMan

Excellent

This is a style of poetry I have not yet tried, but admire those who do it well. The relatively, but not perfectly, smooth shape enhances this one in some subconscious way. I like it.

 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

Well, I appreciate your generous review and kind thoughts, WalkerMan.

Have a great weekend,
Senyai

reply by WalkerMan on 07-May-2016

You're welcome. -- Mike

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

If anyone says your lines sound affected, tell them to tackle a palindrome.
It takes a certain genius to get the words to make sense at all. Excellent.

 Comment Written 06-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

LIJ Red, thanks for the great comments and review of my work.
Thanks for having my back ;)

Have a great weekend,
Senyai

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting poem you have penned. I love to look up at the sky and see all the clouds. They are so beautiful even the storm clouds. I love the wording and the art work. Teri

 Comment Written 06-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

The sky is open for dreams :) Thank you for such a great review and kind thoughts, Ten7.

Senyai

Comment from evilynne

Excellent

Your poem is a beautiful tribute to the season of spring, well worded and descriptive. Spring is certainly a lovely but changeable season. Best of luck in the contest. Evi

 Comment Written 06-May-2016

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reply by the author on 06-May-2016

Evilynn, thank you for your kind words and generous review.

Have a great weekend :)
Senyai

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

What a lovely spring portrait you have painted for us in Palindrome, Senyai. Oh the wind, how it loves to twirl and play with all the colours and textures of nature.

Beautiful job with this and I wish you all the best in the contest.

Gloria

 Comment Written 06-May-2016

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reply by the author on 06-May-2016

Thank you so very much, Gloria :)

Comment from Lisa Deverick

Excellent

Just in time- we were all getting so tired of winter! So refreshing. I like the line of winds 'painting cloud pictures.' I always figure that is how I will die one day- driving while looking at the cloud pictures. I can't help myself! well done

 Comment Written 06-May-2016

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reply by the author on 06-May-2016

Oh no, Lisa! Save the sky gazing when you're in park or at a park reclining on a blanket looking up :)

Thank you for the lovely review.
Have a great weekend.
Senyai

reply by Lisa Deverick on 08-May-2016

lol I will try