Comment from dorts

Excellent

I loved your poem. How many times when we are sad and lonely do we wish for some human contact and the phone rings and makes our day.

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 Comment Written 11-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016

True, "D"....so true! Thanks for stopping in your busy day to read and review my work :)

Missy

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I really enjoyed this piece. The first verse really sets the tone for what is to follow. The swing in the third verse sets a good juxtaposition and the description from the first verse changes perspective in the last. Great stuff.

Just one thing - why is the title 'Five little words' would it not be better as 'five little letters' - it would make more sense.

GMG

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 Comment Written 11-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016

Gosh, dang it!!! Was saying that in my mind...but put the other!!! lol Thanks "G"...off to correct!

Always,
Missy