2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "haiku (last light of day)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
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Comment from tfawcus
How richly we are blessed with double delight when such images are reflected in water. Clever presentation in the last line to accentuate the point.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2015
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How richly we are blessed with double delight when such images are reflected in water. Clever presentation in the last line to accentuate the point.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2015
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Hello :) I really appreciate you taking the time to review my haiku-Thank you!
Comment from Dean Kuch
Not only do I like this haiku, dearest Gypsy, but I also enjoyed the formatting with the changing of font sizes. It gives your satori the illusion of rippling, much like the waves in a body of water would do. Like a lake, for example...
Good stuff. Keep 'em coming...
~Dean ;)
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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2015
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Not only do I like this haiku, dearest Gypsy, but I also enjoyed the formatting with the changing of font sizes. It gives your satori the illusion of rippling, much like the waves in a body of water would do. Like a lake, for example...
Good stuff. Keep 'em coming...
~Dean ;)
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Comment Written 30-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2015
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Hello Handsome :) I really appreciate you taking the time to review my haiku-Thank you! (((((gypsy hugs ))))))
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Anytime, Gypsy, darlin'. You're more than welcome.
XXX
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~Dean :})