Sweet Stephanie
A poem I wrote for someone special55 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
I like your poem, and I love the author notes explaining your life. Yes, it is true that nothing brings more happiness than touching someone's soul with what we write. I love your romantic idea as to how to find a mate. I wish you luck and happiness, in your pursuit of a woman who loves your poetry. It is a well-written poem, and I am glad it brought tears to her eyes. Thanks for sharing your talent and your story with me.
Peace, Jesse
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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I like your poem, and I love the author notes explaining your life. Yes, it is true that nothing brings more happiness than touching someone's soul with what we write. I love your romantic idea as to how to find a mate. I wish you luck and happiness, in your pursuit of a woman who loves your poetry. It is a well-written poem, and I am glad it brought tears to her eyes. Thanks for sharing your talent and your story with me.
Peace, Jesse
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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hanks so much for your review
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I expected a little more than that in response to what I said, but, you are welcome.
Jesse
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I appreciate your review very much and the sentiment you shared i apologize right before your review someone gave me a one star review and brutalized the poem kinda threw me a bit
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I understand completely. Thanks for explaining yourself.
Jesse
Comment from Liberty Justice
Photo portrays two love birds. Verses depict woman in love wants man who is true. She doesn't just want a fling. She loves moonlight walks and dancing under the stars.liberty justice
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Photo portrays two love birds. Verses depict woman in love wants man who is true. She doesn't just want a fling. She loves moonlight walks and dancing under the stars.liberty justice
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
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hanks so much for your review
Comment from GWHARGIS
This is a beautiful poem. Good rhythm and flow. There was a gentle tone that brought a genuineness to this piece. Great imagery. Well written. Good luck with your friend. Gretchen
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This is a beautiful poem. Good rhythm and flow. There was a gentle tone that brought a genuineness to this piece. Great imagery. Well written. Good luck with your friend. Gretchen
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
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hanks so much for your review
Comment from AnnaLinda
Earthwriter,
I can see why Stephanie was touched by your poem.
I hope all goes better than you think tomorrow and
this poem framed will be a very special gift indeed.
I like the romantic picture you painted with your
words and the rhymes within each stanza.
Sending you all my best,
Linda
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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Earthwriter,
I can see why Stephanie was touched by your poem.
I hope all goes better than you think tomorrow and
this poem framed will be a very special gift indeed.
I like the romantic picture you painted with your
words and the rhymes within each stanza.
Sending you all my best,
Linda
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
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hanks so much for your review
Comment from chcbeck
What a beautiful poem written with such sincerity, for someone to be moved so much by your words must mean there is a special bond. I wish you all the luck and hope to be reading a poem about a successful meeting.
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What a beautiful poem written with such sincerity, for someone to be moved so much by your words must mean there is a special bond. I wish you all the luck and hope to be reading a poem about a successful meeting.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
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thanks so much for your review
Comment from chasennov
A poem I wrote for someone special. Sweet Stephanie.' What a truly beautiful romantic poem you have created here, Monty Harris. No wonder it brought your lady to tears. You seem to have a great potential as a poet. However, your author notes tell a different story; it screams of ignorance and haphazardness. If you're going to point fingers at other people's work, make very sure that your own work is perfect, first and foremost! There are eleven mistakes in your work, but I am not your editor to point them out to you. I would hope you are smart enough to find those for your self. You have also totally misread my work. I wrote (apologies). Nothing wrong with that. Apologize is the American version of apologise, nothing wrong with that either; because you do not own the sole right in the US to that word. There are no spelling mistakes in the author notes; but lo and behold you have misspelled the word you accused me of, yourself. As far as your remark about originality is concerned, you are totally out of order there as well. That would mean that every Fanstorian Christian would be culpable of a misdemeanour if they wrote anything printed in the Bible. Get a good grip on yourself, and stop being selfish and stupid. Have a Happy New Year.
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A poem I wrote for someone special. Sweet Stephanie.' What a truly beautiful romantic poem you have created here, Monty Harris. No wonder it brought your lady to tears. You seem to have a great potential as a poet. However, your author notes tell a different story; it screams of ignorance and haphazardness. If you're going to point fingers at other people's work, make very sure that your own work is perfect, first and foremost! There are eleven mistakes in your work, but I am not your editor to point them out to you. I would hope you are smart enough to find those for your self. You have also totally misread my work. I wrote (apologies). Nothing wrong with that. Apologize is the American version of apologise, nothing wrong with that either; because you do not own the sole right in the US to that word. There are no spelling mistakes in the author notes; but lo and behold you have misspelled the word you accused me of, yourself. As far as your remark about originality is concerned, you are totally out of order there as well. That would mean that every Fanstorian Christian would be culpable of a misdemeanour if they wrote anything printed in the Bible. Get a good grip on yourself, and stop being selfish and stupid. Have a Happy New Year.
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Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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very immature and seemingly not very Christian either
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Keep on pointing your finger and four of them point right back at you. You are the immature person here, let alone being Christian. Be a real man, correct your mistakes, and apologise.
Comment from seaglass
This poem has wonderful rhyme and meter. It is easy to read. I like that the meaning is clear and not a puzzle to try and figure out. I'm not big of riddles. This is the dream of most women, I think, but few find their dream.
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This poem has wonderful rhyme and meter. It is easy to read. I like that the meaning is clear and not a puzzle to try and figure out. I'm not big of riddles. This is the dream of most women, I think, but few find their dream.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
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hanks so much for your review
Comment from foxangie123
Oh my this is stunningly lovely as each line reaches out and delicately kisses the reader on the cheek. I so love this poem and would give it six stars if I had. Thank you for lifting each of us up with that you write. Beautiful in your poetry is abundant...
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Oh my this is stunningly lovely as each line reaches out and delicately kisses the reader on the cheek. I so love this poem and would give it six stars if I had. Thank you for lifting each of us up with that you write. Beautiful in your poetry is abundant...
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
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hanks so much for your review i am glad it touched you
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Wonderful Work...
Comment from c_lucas
Sometimes, one must let a sure thing past. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Wishing you and yours a Happy New Year.
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Sometimes, one must let a sure thing past. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Wishing you and yours a Happy New Year.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
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hanks so much for your review
Comment from pattipac
Thank you so much for sharing your love poem with us, poet. Surly you will one day find the love of your life. One who will cherish your poems, and motivate you to continue pursuing your passion for writing. Good luck. 2016 could be the year!
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Thank you so much for sharing your love poem with us, poet. Surly you will one day find the love of your life. One who will cherish your poems, and motivate you to continue pursuing your passion for writing. Good luck. 2016 could be the year!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
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hanks so much for your review