2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "5/7/5 (be more like a tree)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
42 total reviews
Comment from AnnaLinda
Author,
Your 5-7-5 entry is in great form and it has a lovely presentation as well.
Your message of having deep roots with the ability to be flexible was well
conveyed in your well crafted poem.
Best wished,
Linda
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Author,
Your 5-7-5 entry is in great form and it has a lovely presentation as well.
Your message of having deep roots with the ability to be flexible was well
conveyed in your well crafted poem.
Best wished,
Linda
Comment Written 17-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Thank you Linda :) I appreciate your excellent review.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This meets the qualification of the Tree-Hugger prompt as to form, subject and syllable count. The presentation is very pretty. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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This meets the qualification of the Tree-Hugger prompt as to form, subject and syllable count. The presentation is very pretty. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 17-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Thank you Jeanie :)
Comment from w.j.debi
This is such excellent advice--one of those sayings that should be in a thought for the day book or taped to the mirror to give a little boost in those relective moments.
Good luck n the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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This is such excellent advice--one of those sayings that should be in a thought for the day book or taped to the mirror to give a little boost in those relective moments.
Good luck n the contest.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much :) I appreciate your excellent review.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Mystery writer: I like the warm colors and moon light. You give us good advice
with being deeply grounded. Great entry for the fast contest. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Mystery writer: I like the warm colors and moon light. You give us good advice
with being deeply grounded. Great entry for the fast contest. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 17-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much :) I appreciate your excellent review.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow! What a profound little poem this is - so very wise! Such use of simile and metaphor is my favourite. It's easy to understand, yet layered with meaning. I wish you all the best in the contest with this tiny gem!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Wow! What a profound little poem this is - so very wise! Such use of simile and metaphor is my favourite. It's easy to understand, yet layered with meaning. I wish you all the best in the contest with this tiny gem!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much :) I appreciate your excellent review.
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You're very welcome!
Comment from MsPetra
Well done. You nailed the format. I too am a tree hugger.
I like the idea of it, deeply grounded in the earth, with flexible limbs
I wouldn't change a thing.
Please keep writing. I will be looking forward to future offerings from you.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Well done. You nailed the format. I too am a tree hugger.
I like the idea of it, deeply grounded in the earth, with flexible limbs
I wouldn't change a thing.
Please keep writing. I will be looking forward to future offerings from you.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much :) I appreciate your excellent review.
Comment from Tessa Kay
Very nice application of the contest topic, bringing it down to humans. If we are like a tree, we're not easily shaken, but the flexible branches help us to keep peace.
Well done. :)
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Very nice application of the contest topic, bringing it down to humans. If we are like a tree, we're not easily shaken, but the flexible branches help us to keep peace.
Well done. :)
Comment Written 17-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much :) I appreciate your excellent review.
Comment from Janet Foor
Beautiful picture to enhance your lovely 5/7/5 poem. I do yoga and we do a "tree pose". Your words are perfect to say while holding the tree pose. In the pose, we are grounded to the earth but must remain flexible. Beautiful.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Beautiful picture to enhance your lovely 5/7/5 poem. I do yoga and we do a "tree pose". Your words are perfect to say while holding the tree pose. In the pose, we are grounded to the earth but must remain flexible. Beautiful.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much :) I appreciate your excellent review.
Comment from livelylinda
Author: lovely poem with great message. Perfect 5/7/5, good picture and colors. A neat package for a great contest contender. livelylinda
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Author: lovely poem with great message. Perfect 5/7/5, good picture and colors. A neat package for a great contest contender. livelylinda
Comment Written 17-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much :) I appreciate your excellent review.
Comment from OnyxSapphire78
Great job on this 5-7-5 poem! It should make a nice entry for the contest. I find it hard to say so much with such few words. If we were more grounded in nature and all it has to offer we would all be better off. Good luck and happy writing!
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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Great job on this 5-7-5 poem! It should make a nice entry for the contest. I find it hard to say so much with such few words. If we were more grounded in nature and all it has to offer we would all be better off. Good luck and happy writing!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much :) I appreciate your excellent review.