A Journey...Darkness to Light
Contest entry35 total reviews
Comment from Tessa Kay
Sorry, haven't got a six left, otherwise I would've given you one. This is so powerful and beautifully constructed. Love the alliterations going throughout.
A harrowing journey well described with a peaceful ending.
Very well done.
All the best in the contest. This should do very well.:)
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2015
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Sorry, haven't got a six left, otherwise I would've given you one. This is so powerful and beautifully constructed. Love the alliterations going throughout.
A harrowing journey well described with a peaceful ending.
Very well done.
All the best in the contest. This should do very well.:)
Comment Written 01-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2015
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Thank you for the kind words. I appreciate your review very much
Comment from Eric1
Hi Pierre, this is an excellent entry for this particular competition, a veritable cornucopia of mixed styles and wonderful description with brilliant imagery, I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2015
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Hi Pierre, this is an excellent entry for this particular competition, a veritable cornucopia of mixed styles and wonderful description with brilliant imagery, I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2015
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Thank you for taking time to read the poem. I appreciate your review
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You are very welcome my friend.
Comment from Joan E.
You certainly take us on a detailed "journey"--I admired the descriptive subheadings. Your addition of rhyme and alliteration adds to the intensity of the imagery in your story. The positive conclusion after the traumatic experience of the death of one's child is uplifting. Best wishes in this unusual contest, which you managed quite well. I was pleased I had the six your post richly deserves. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2015
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You certainly take us on a detailed "journey"--I admired the descriptive subheadings. Your addition of rhyme and alliteration adds to the intensity of the imagery in your story. The positive conclusion after the traumatic experience of the death of one's child is uplifting. Best wishes in this unusual contest, which you managed quite well. I was pleased I had the six your post richly deserves. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 30-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2015
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Thank you Joan. The poem was somewhat difficult to write. I was glad to post it and stop thinking about it. I deeply appreciate your six. have a good night
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Pierre Poote this is a solid write. At first I thought the length would put me off but I was drawn by the first line. This poem had my attention throughout the read. It is cleverly written and very descriptive. The presentation is very neat and attractive. It has a strong message of hope and faith. Well done for this enjoyable poem and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2015
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Pierre Poote this is a solid write. At first I thought the length would put me off but I was drawn by the first line. This poem had my attention throughout the read. It is cleverly written and very descriptive. The presentation is very neat and attractive. It has a strong message of hope and faith. Well done for this enjoyable poem and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2015
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Thank you for the kind words. It is lengthy. I appreciate you taking your time to read it and commenting.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. I thought this poem was absolutely awesome. You take the reader through the depths of despair and back again. Marvelous writing.
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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2015
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Excellent. I thought this poem was absolutely awesome. You take the reader through the depths of despair and back again. Marvelous writing.
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Comment Written 30-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2015
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Thank you for the kind words. I deeply appreciate your taking the time to read a somewhat lengthy poem
