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Poems of Love and Spirit

Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Making the Most of Moment"
This book is about love, God's Love most of all.

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Comment from Chuck23
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I enjoyed the wisdom in your poem! Something I struggle to keep in mind is a positive attitude with each new day! The picture with the dog pal is a nice compliment to your poem.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2015

reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
    Thank you for taking the time to review my poem, and I'm glad it is meaningful to you. Keeping a positive attitude is always a struggle especially against the negative influences of the today's world.
Comment from Selina Stambi
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Don't let this blessed moment pass your way, (m)y dear,
for there are wondrous riches in the silence of a prayer! ... yes, yes, yes!!

Dear gudborg,

We connected briefly some months back and you sent me an amazing message with a lengthy explanation of my name (remember?). I wondered what happened to you since then. Hope you are keeping well. God bless you.

Love,

Sonali (formerly Reachingforthestars)



Why don't you focus on the things that make you wise,
rather than let confusion fill your mind with lies(?)

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2015

reply by the author on 15-Oct-2015
    Hi! Sonali.
    Thank you for your great review of my poem, it was wonderful to hear from you again. I'm doing quite well considering the circumstances thanks to the Lord's power.
    With love and kindness.

    Gb
Comment from rspoet
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Cling to those moments of peace and harmony
for they will soften the blows of the day
Morning is an introspective time
Clear and fresh, like the spirit
before the cacophony of day begins
Sometimes night time has such calm
and sometimes there is a pocket in the day
that you can open and step inside
A nicely rhymed poem
with a beautiful, calm photo to match
Well done

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
    Thank you for taking the time to write your review, it was very helpful and encouraging. I also like what you wrote about the moments of peace and harmony.
Comment from Tessa Kay
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Don't know if the picture is a photo. If it is, I can imagine what prompted you to write this poem. Taking the dog out for a walk in those surroundings, you'd need to stop and appreciate.
Life is too rushed most of the time. Good to get a reminder like in your poem. Well done. :)

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
    Thank you for taking the time to review my poem, it was both helpful and encouraging.
Comment from JTStone
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It's just sun up here where I'm at, so I'm taking your advice and starting the day with your poem and a fresh attitude.
Nice flow and count, it was easy to read and the thought put into it was right there to feel.
JT

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
    Thank you for taking the time to review my poem and I'm glad you liked it and thankful for your fine words about it.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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Each moment of our lives are precious. Yes, make it a masterpiece. Happiness and joy is much better than anger and distress. I like to laugh and be happy all the time.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
    Thank you for taking the time to review my poem, it was nice to read what you said about it and you liked it.
Comment from prettybluebirds
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Excellent. This is a lovely poem and I like the message you are sending the reader. We all need to be more positive and happy. Life is to short to be unhappy. Good work

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
    Thank you for taking the time to review my poem, and that it was an inspiration to you.
Comment from Supe
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This should be posted on the fridge or somewhere where you can read your uplifitng words before you start your day. Lovely piece of work, smooth, love the rhyming and a great message from the heart. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2015

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
    Thank you for a marvelous reply, more than I could dream for. With kindness, Gudbjorg
Comment from Eric1
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Hi Gudbjorg, Amen to your wonderful poem , it exudes a wonderful feeling to the reader through your beautiful well rhymed words, the rhythm and flow are very smooth my friend.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2015

reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
    Thank you Eric for your heartfelt review, it was especially uplifting to me to read it and it encouraged me to greatly.
    With kindness,
    Gudbjorg
reply by Eric1 on 26-Sep-2015
    You are very welcome my friend.
Comment from Ricky1024
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Great work I love this shitt with Rich and semen imagery based on the subject of life and how beautiful the world is today the best things in life of course they're always free freshwater fresh air that we can breathe the flowers the birds in the trees the bees on the breeze thanks for this talk to Ricky

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2015

reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015
    Thank you Ricky for taking the time to review my work, and it really encourages me to hear you like it.
    With kindness,
    Gb