2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "haiku ( radiant sun )"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Sunny side up - nice! I like how you wrote this. I could picture the sun behind the mountain. The imagery was very powerful. Very creative and well written.
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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
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Sunny side up - nice! I like how you wrote this. I could picture the sun behind the mountain. The imagery was very powerful. Very creative and well written.
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
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Thank you Michael :)
Comment from Ben Colder
Sounds like the way I like my eggs. Nothing wrong with this short worded poem. Hope you win the contest. I find nothing wrong with it.
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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
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Sounds like the way I like my eggs. Nothing wrong with this short worded poem. Hope you win the contest. I find nothing wrong with it.
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
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Thank you Ben :)