Comment from robina1978

Excellent

Did you write this yourself Dean? It sounded different to me. The guy watches the girl from across the road, eats his popcorn, she kills her victims female or male. At the end he is going to be next.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015

Yep, I sure did, Ine, I wrote it while in the hospital and edited it Friday and Saturday nights. I spied a young girl in the hospital in the wing across the way adjacent to mine, and she smiled and waved at me. I nodded, slightly embarrassed that she'd caught me staring, then pulled my drapes closed. Of course, she was in a hospital gown like I was, and she wasn't actually ripping anyone to shreds. But it is where the inspiration for this story came from.

Thanks very much for your review. :} ~Dean

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

This is great. I didn't see this coming and clearly, he didn't either. Yup, hearing a knock at my door right about now would do it. You are truly the King of horror. Keep up the great work.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2015

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

You're next Scarecrow! LOL..How can I guy pop his corn when somebody is beating on the door? Very well done, you clever horror dude, you. I feel like you may be feeling better? Hope so. Bob

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Comment from justafan

Excellent

Oh no!!! Was gonna say run, but hell he deserves what he is gonna get for peeking.
I am just in awe at your work, as I have said before. This is just another example of your amazing creativity Dean.

Always your fan,
Missy

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2015

Comment from CD Richards

Excellent

Lucky buggar - I have to use a telescope to spy on the neighbors.... I mean *would* have to.

A fun read, as usual. Sorry, I'd comment further, but someone's knocking at the door.

Good work, thanks for sh............

Craig.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015

Hah! So, I got my wish after all, huh, Craig? Please tell her (before her demonic transformation into the succubus she truly is) that old Deano said, "Hell-Low", heh-heh...

Thanks a bunch for the laugh and the review, my friend.

~Dean

Comment from write hand blue

Excellent

Hi Dean, another little cameo you have created there.

That's some show she puts on for him. So he knows what is required of him when the time comes.

An original addition to the book.

:) Mel.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2015

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

I wouldn't open the door to them. ha ha. Great little read Dean, and as always after the horror, I had a little chuckle with the ending when -someone's beatin' - at his door. Great chapter.

valda

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2015

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

This is yet another excellent poem by the author here. I wouldn't like to be that person listening to that knocking on the door. Ah well. Just like you said, he will get a private more personal show now. 😃

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Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

He isn't too bright. Now, is he?
Just how long did he think she'd just let him watch?
It's time for audience participation.
I'm wondering what she transformed into-- a werewolf, perhaps?

:) e

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Comment from ProjectBluebook

Excellent

I love that paint artwork. Great idea with the popcorn horror. Never heard it said that way. watchin' her through my bedroom window. Hell, it ain't like I'm doin' nothin' wrong. Yell, right. Jeepers creepers, where you get them peepers? She puts on one helluva show, too-just for me. hum... like to see the sideshow. She transforms so damn fast. Wonder what? Creepy. Nobody best not come calling at me door? Creepmaster. Heck of a fable. Knees are weak and knocking, this is shocking! Spoo-a-doo.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2015