Comment from mommerry

Excellent

I felt like I was "running" with you as I read your silly poem - hurrying through critiques and wondering if I gave enough encouragement or too much. Good job - I could not have done it half as well.

 Comment Written 27-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thanks so much my friend for your very kind review. Pharp

Comment from His Grayness

Excellent

brilliantly done here with some obvious contemplation. Mind games are always a good way to scrub the dust off a poet's tablet and this one gets the job done well! HIS GRAYNESS

 Comment Written 27-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thanks so much for your rating and very kind comments. Pharp

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This is a cleverly done acrostic. I like the rhymes you chose and the rhythm, too. Your message is very amusing and the presentation is great."Dipper/zipper" was a good rhyme. Nothing forced about it. Great job!

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 Comment Written 27-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thanks so much for your review and rating; greatly appreciated. Pharp

Comment from Ginnygray

Excellent

You definitely chose an interesting form, the Acrostic, and well liked word, Fanstory! You were right, I did find several lines that made me chuckle as well as appreciate your creativity here! I really enjoyed reading your poem, and I liked your fun art to express your mood! Thanks!

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 Comment Written 27-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thanks so much for your very kind comments, I am glad you got a chuckle out of it. LOL Pharp