Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Superb poem for Brooke. I'm crushed by the news. Life can be so unfair. Brooke deserves better than what cruel fate has burdened her with.

 Comment Written 26-May-2015

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reply by the author on 26-May-2015

I am crushed too, Phyllis. So unfair. Thank you so much for your great review.

Gloria

Comment from songecho

Average

Well-intended communication on a personal level.
There's a warm wind blowing the stars around. You wouldn't want it any other way.

I think it deserved a second try before you whispered goodbye too soon.

You don't have to bring me to my knees, you've got me to believe i know.
Who are you, I really want to know. She moves in mysterious ways; it's all right.





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 Comment Written 26-May-2015

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reply by the author on 26-May-2015

This is intended for a very personal reason for a tragic occurrence songecho. Your review is way off base and offensive. I realize you are new to the site, and because of that I will go easy on you, but there is wisdom in the old adage, Look before you leap.

Gloria

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Gloria...

I'm so pleased I ran saw your post. I just did a dedication to Brooke. This was a super idea!

I hope she's back with us soon.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 26-May-2015

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reply by the author on 26-May-2015

Thank you Jax. You are super.

Gloria

reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 26-May-2015

She is one fine lady. I've learned a lot from her. (*<*)

Comment from bayforesthimankush

Excellent

This is a get well message through a poem. The sender tells the recipient the stories of their life together. This shall definitely cheer up and get the recipient well soon. This is a new way of telling get well soon recollecting the past memories.

 Comment Written 25-May-2015

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reply by the author on 29-May-2015

Thank you so much for your encouraging review, mankush. I hope all the get wells bring Brooke back to her FanStory family.

Much appreciation,

Gloria

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

i am so sorry to read about brooke! her great reviews and childlike poems are sorely missed! you have written an outstanding tribute to her! nice one. i hope she will recover.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 25-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thank you so kindly rebekka. I hope all our well wishes bring a big smile to Brooke's face. She is sorely missed for sure.

Appreciation,

Gloria

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

What a fantastic poem and thanks for the notes. I went on her profile page to find out what happened. Nothing there. I liked the example you gave about commas and the newest family member. I adored her counting poems especially. I will wish her to get better each day.

 Comment Written 25-May-2015

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reply by the author on 28-May-2015

Thank you so kindly for your wonderful review, Shari. It all just came up so fast, but I thank Miranda for letting us know what was going on. I hope everyone's letters and well-wishes bring a smile to Brooke.

Thanks again,

Gloria

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

What a lovely tribute to our Brooke, Gloria. She has always been such a staple here. She seemed to draw from an absolutely bottomless creative source, with each thing snugged into the perfect rhyme and tempo.

I was unaware that you had a history with her. I shall check the boards and see if there are any updates.

 Comment Written 25-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Hey Jay. Many thanks to you. Yep Brookes is an amazing poet. I marveled at her energy too. She just gave so much to everyone and it sure shows.

Appreciation to you my friend,

Gloria

Comment from GWinterwin

Excellent

Great poem and tribute to Brooke, I am so sorry to hear about her. I didn't know she was sick, thanks for this poem and tribute that those who like myself didn't know might know.

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 Comment Written 25-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

George, how great to see you. Brooke will be pleased to read your comments, as I am I. Always love your visits dear friend.

Gloria