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Nature's Show

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93 total reviews 
Comment from RGstar
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These are always difficult to judge, but there is a gentleness and honesty in all the work you put down and this is no exception. Good hearts relay good things...and you certainly have such.

Lovely image to match your thesis.
Best wishes, my friend,
RG

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
    HI Roy, always glad to see you my friend...and thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...luff Linda xxoo
    came in second with a few others...smiling...
Comment from Nosha17
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Nature certainly gives us a panoramic view onto the world, better than any film. Well chosen words to convey your message. Good complimentary image, good luck in the contest. Faye

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
    HI Faye, thank you so very much for a great review...tied second with a few others...so glad you like it...luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Drew Delaney
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I thought you were very clever with the word, 'cinema'. A good satori with only 3 syllables. How brilliant. Nice work and best wishes in the Nature writing prompt . Drew

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
    Hi Drew, thank you so very much a wonderful review...tied for second with a few others...smiling...so glad you like it...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from mauial
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There is so much beautiful things to see in nature if we would just take the time to do it. Many never get that experience because they live in a city jungle :(

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
    Hi Mauial, you are so right...and there is so much beauty to see...free...thank you for a great review...I am so glad you like it...luff Linda xxoo
Comment from acerisestory
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Your nature 3-5-3 is a very nice one, Linda!

I love your play on words, and your satori is a perfect and clever follow-up.

You've chosen lovely artwork as a fine enhancement for your words.

Best of luck in the contest! Alana


 Comment Written 11-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
    HI Alana, thank you so much for a great review...it came in second with a few others...I am so glad you like it...Luff Linda xoox
Comment from persevere
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In a descriptive 3-5-3, you have made it clear that one does not need to go to a cinema to experience the natural world. It is there on our doorstep without any artificial embellishment.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
    thank you so much persevere...you are so right...just what I was saying...nature is a giant cinema by itself...thank you for a great review...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from pbroussard209
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I love nature and all it's glory, and when I was young and lived in the country I would just sit for hours and enjoy. Now, I live in a city, and I am often in awe at my children's reactions over something as simple as a blue jay, or a cardinal and if a hawk happens to venture into our small back yard, my kids run for their phones and start taking pictures. I spent so much time in the mountains growing up that they became a part of me, yet my children have never seen one. I feel as if I have deprived them, of a right to enjoy the beauty of this world.


 Comment Written 11-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
    Hi Trish, we were raised part country...and part city...and I love nature...it is so beautiful...and free to see...thank you for a truly wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Cedar
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There you are! I haven't seen you on the site for several weeks, so I left a message on your profile page. Hey, this is a beautiful 3-5-3. Your words are a perfect match for that gorgeous picture. You almost tied for the win. I didn't know you were back until this morning. If you've been sick, I hope you're feeling better. Take care my friend. Bill

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
    Hi Bill, I was sick when I wrote the poem...should be better soon...I was LMAO with all the mistakes I wrote with so few words...be I finally got it right...you shouldn't write poems...much less join a contest with a 102 temp...LOL...just haven't had the push to write...thank you for a wonderful review...as always...and you take care as well...love ya Linda Luff
Comment from ann marie mazz
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good morning linda

you can bet all your entries its a cinema
how very true
the title is perfect
the format is true to form
and yes
even the tone and voice follow the format
the presentation is marvelous
all is well within the entry

thank you for sharing your talent
this was a pleasure to read
enjoy the day and nature
ann marie

PS
as we speak where I sit our cinema is
white glistening snow with large crystal icicles

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
    HI Ann Marie, that is the same cinema we have here...all white...but it is beautiful...thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...and you have a great night...luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Glasstruth
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Awesome picture. For 11 syllables it's difficult to get a lot in, but you've handled it well. Good luck with the contest. Les

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
    HI Les, thank you so very much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...came in second with a few others...smiling...luff Linda xxoo