The Blue Balloon
Flash Fiction - about 600 words - a children's story32 total reviews
Comment from Nosha17
That is a very cute story, which should appeal to kids very well. Likeable characters, good descriptions and a fun read. Ideal setting for a kids' story. Faye
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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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That is a very cute story, which should appeal to kids very well. Likeable characters, good descriptions and a fun read. Ideal setting for a kids' story. Faye
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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Thanks, Faye, for reading and reviewing. Much appreciated! Glad you enjoyed it. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Ben Colder
Don't matter about the contest this was very wholesome to read. Excellent take of the fair and the actions it provides. Well done. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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Don't matter about the contest this was very wholesome to read. Excellent take of the fair and the actions it provides. Well done. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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Thanks, Ben, for reading and reviewing. Much appreciated! Glad you enjoyed it. Best wishes, Tony