Her Victory (Maureen)
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Comment from granny goes viral
Yes. Yes, to every word. If six stars could ease her way, on any road that is before her, I would give this poem all I had.
I do not know how long her road is or how rocky. It seems long indeed.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Yes. Yes, to every word. If six stars could ease her way, on any road that is before her, I would give this poem all I had.
I do not know how long her road is or how rocky. It seems long indeed.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Sheila, thank you ever so much. I am so thrilled we are fans of each other and I am so humbled by this review, truly.. Jimi
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If only the stars could heal. If only.
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I know sweet friend, I know
Comment from w.j.debi
True depth of emotion and excellent message. Maureen deserves peace and rest. Whatever the outcome, she has fought a wonderful battle full of love and grace. Her spirit has touched many and will do so for a long time.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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True depth of emotion and excellent message. Maureen deserves peace and rest. Whatever the outcome, she has fought a wonderful battle full of love and grace. Her spirit has touched many and will do so for a long time.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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w.j.debi, once again a huge huge thank you from the deepest chambers of my heart. I am humbled. I still have so many reviews to answer but my time is so limited, it is often difficult. I am afraid I might appear ungrateful and rude.. again thank you sweet friend.. Jimi
Comment from Joe_P
A loving tribute to a loved one in pain, a brave soul who refuses to give up. She has contributed much of herself. A wonderful choice of words, smooth flowing like a river. One of the very best poems I have read.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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A loving tribute to a loved one in pain, a brave soul who refuses to give up. She has contributed much of herself. A wonderful choice of words, smooth flowing like a river. One of the very best poems I have read.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Joe.P, thank you ever so much. I am truly humbled. I see you are new to Fanstory. Welcome. Again a huge thank you!!! jlsavell
Comment from adewpearl
solid use of abcb rhyme
you and I are on the same wave length - I think she's been a Celtic Warrior long enough and needs permission to stay asleep in peace
strong imagery in the peaks of pain stanza
whichever you choose - yes, this is my prayer for her too
this woman needs not prove one more thing about her courage to anyone, certainly not me. Brooke
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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solid use of abcb rhyme
you and I are on the same wave length - I think she's been a Celtic Warrior long enough and needs permission to stay asleep in peace
strong imagery in the peaks of pain stanza
whichever you choose - yes, this is my prayer for her too
this woman needs not prove one more thing about her courage to anyone, certainly not me. Brooke
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Brooke, thank you for putting me at ease. I was not sure how this would be received. Our sweet Maureen must be exhausted. I liken her experience to a person gripping with all their might to the rough brick ledge of a tall building to keep from falling. My heart goes out to her and her family.
I have heard of instances where once the stricken are given permission to go and assured things will be alright, then they let go.
Thank you sweet friend.. Jimi
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I was ranting about this to my daughter - not her family, but people who read their updates and then tell her, stay strong, keep fighting, we know you can beat this. I swear some of them expect her to be home and posting poems by next week.
Comment from Spiritual Echo
And may we leave such footsteps that other writers will whisper our name, remember our dreams and write with such eloquence as you did about Maureen.
Your tribute speaks of authentic emotions, not a competition of rhyme or meter, and I felt the sting of regret never having known the woman as you did.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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And may we leave such footsteps that other writers will whisper our name, remember our dreams and write with such eloquence as you did about Maureen.
Your tribute speaks of authentic emotions, not a competition of rhyme or meter, and I felt the sting of regret never having known the woman as you did.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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SpiritualEcho, thank you sweet friend. Yes, Maureen is one of the easiest and joyful people you would ever have the privilege to know. She has left her mark, undoubtedly.. again thank you. I am truly humbled.. Jimi
Comment from stroncoso1
What a lovely poem and wonderful tribute to your friend Maureen. It comes across personal and very heartfelt. I like several of your verses and lines like, "You've infused each new day with purest gold Weaved a silver lining in the darkest clouds of woe" are simply exquisite. I'm sorry for your loss. Your poem is very moving.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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What a lovely poem and wonderful tribute to your friend Maureen. It comes across personal and very heartfelt. I like several of your verses and lines like, "You've infused each new day with purest gold Weaved a silver lining in the darkest clouds of woe" are simply exquisite. I'm sorry for your loss. Your poem is very moving.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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stoncoso1, thank you ever so much for reading and reviewing my offering. Maureen is very special to all of Fanstory. Thank you ever so much.. jlsavell
Comment from Veeb
A beautiful tribute to a friend's courageous fight of this ravaging beast we call cancer. Obviously she is beloved and admired for her gracious and loving spirit. I was completely swept up in this lovely song. Thanks for sharing a glimpse of Maureen with all of us.
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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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A beautiful tribute to a friend's courageous fight of this ravaging beast we call cancer. Obviously she is beloved and admired for her gracious and loving spirit. I was completely swept up in this lovely song. Thanks for sharing a glimpse of Maureen with all of us.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Veeb, thank you ever so much. I am truly humbled by your visit and your review.. jlsavell