The Wedding Dress
Remembering when my Mother let me try on her wedding dress34 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
this is a fine piece of poetic art! i like the meaning of the dress carried out in generations and entwining these faiths together.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
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this is a fine piece of poetic art! i like the meaning of the dress carried out in generations and entwining these faiths together.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
Comment from DSMalott
Very nice.
This had such real nostalgia in its presentation. The wording and structure painted a wonderful picture of heritage and family tradition.
Such a great free verse expression for the contest.
I loved it.
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Very nice.
This had such real nostalgia in its presentation. The wording and structure painted a wonderful picture of heritage and family tradition.
Such a great free verse expression for the contest.
I loved it.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
Comment from djsaxon
Truly beautiful and finely penned. I love the imagery. Not a word wasted. Thank you for sharing the memory. BTB, the dress is quite beautiful. - DJ
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Truly beautiful and finely penned. I love the imagery. Not a word wasted. Thank you for sharing the memory. BTB, the dress is quite beautiful. - DJ
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Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
Comment from stroncoso1
What a lovely memory and a treasured heirloom. I enjoyed your free verse very much. Your descriptions are vivid and I could feel the velvet dress on my cheek and the cold, running to the car as your mom did on her wedding day. If this is a true story, I am indeed moved at the tradition your family has kept. How wonderful and heartfelt for each of the brides. How very special and unforgettable to wear the velvet burgandy bride's dress.
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What a lovely memory and a treasured heirloom. I enjoyed your free verse very much. Your descriptions are vivid and I could feel the velvet dress on my cheek and the cold, running to the car as your mom did on her wedding day. If this is a true story, I am indeed moved at the tradition your family has kept. How wonderful and heartfelt for each of the brides. How very special and unforgettable to wear the velvet burgandy bride's dress.
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Comment Written 05-Oct-2014